 casey21791 2009-04-04 . chapter 67wow its does get better and better and now im gonna start the next one :) congras great writing u should be proud :) |
 blackanubis9 2008-08-17 . chapter 1I've just finished the third installment, and i couldn't start the fourth before reviewing. I have absolutely loved this story, and no way in hell is it mary sue-ish. There is a difference between a character who starts out perfect, and a character who has been well-established. Kitty is by no means perfect, even if I love her particular quirks, so don't believe anyone who tells you that for one minute.
I admire the time and effort you have put into this, as i find it so hard to get time to dedicate it to my 'babies'. So many people just miss the Sparrow mark, not quite getting him right, but with the exception of lack of circular thinking/speaking, i find him perfect. I know you've already finished the story and are done with it, but all reviews are candy, and i'll review again when i get done with the whole story. I'd give you a longer review, but i really want to get back to the story, sorry. |
 Pirate-Chic 2006-09-12 . chapter 1hey! yay im finally on ur fourt story!! yay its so good! how can u write soo much?!?! omg ur r so my hero lol! anyways love it and when im done the kitty groves series im so reading your other stories! |
 Allacaya 2006-08-03 . chapter 67 Evil evil - this is like the 2nd movie - stories over and tons of loose threads!
You sure know how to twist story lines.
I guess i'll say good-bye to sleep... Else I can't concentrate tomorrow.The mind is willing but the flesh is weak, or so I presume. |
 Allacaya 2006-08-03 . chapter 15 I can't stop reading - just so you know, I think you wrote "marshal law" in this chapter but you meant "martial law" lik in the last.
In case you'd like to correct it... Don't take it personally, please.
Now I have to continue reading(: so I'll get at least some sleep tonight (: |
 Aewyn 2006-03-30 . chapter 67 Absolutely stunning - I can't stop reading! |
 Sauruna 2006-01-22 . chapter 40 however much I like your stories, I kindly tell you that Belgium didn't exist untill 1830. I would know, I live there ;-) |
 Johnny'shumiliatedgrape 2005-02-27 . chapter 67That's just it. I can't resist it! (:
::looks at chapter one: Which is titled :The Letter:
You know how I love cleverness... (: |
 Johnny'shumiliatedgrape 2005-02-27 . chapter 66He took it rather well really.
The last paragraph was sad Hils! ):
But I think she'll be ok... don't you? |
 Johnny'shumiliatedgrape 2005-02-27 . chapter 65How can it get any better?
OH YEA! MARY! ::evil laugh:: (: I'll just have to keep reading to find out... eh? |
 Johnny'shumiliatedgrape 2005-02-27 . chapter 64"You are the most devious woman I know, Mistress Sparrow!"
"Why thank you Jermiah...Tea?"
I love that about her. (: Imma keep on reading. |
 Johnny'shumiliatedgrape 2005-02-27 . chapter 63Wow. Twists...
I am shocked. But it makes sense you know? |
 Johnny'shumiliatedgrape 2005-02-27 . chapter 61I got so worried about Kitty. But she's ok. And that is very good. (:
Oran... lol. "The things you men do for attention.." I agree.
LOL (: |
 Johnny'shumiliatedgrape 2005-02-27 . chapter 60I wish they'd catch up now.
I'll keep reading. It's like having my nose in a computer... |
 Johnny'shumiliatedgrape 2005-02-27 . chapter 59Good Eilis. I love her. (:
Wonderful. |