Great story. I like how it's pretty much straight from the game. I think that's cool:) Anyways, great story.

WONDERFUL! KEEP GOING! I love the Syphon Filter games and this is just great! Felt like I was reading a published novel based on the game (kinda like the Resident Evil novels)

This is the best fanfic i read.

This chapter - or should I say paragraph - is insanely, overexaggeratedly and unnecessarily long. I'm being sarcastic, but sweet God, press enter once in a while.

wow i never would have guessed since it was basicaly the beginig of the freakin game. no harm done. please R&R my 2 stories