Poor Jack! Will will help him, won't he? Keep going!!

More Jack! I like it. WHy do you need to be shot hto? I really don't understand that. THis has all the makings of a classic one. I want more. THe plot leaes much to be discovered, and leads one to many questions. MORE! UPdate when you can, and let me know, I'll be loking forward to further chapters.

Cassie

really good. real sad though. poor jack. no slash yet, so awaiting that. please update soon!!

OO. This is very well written indeed. I envy you. Update soon, ne? Looks like Jack and Will are both in for some more hurting. ^_^

I'll review if it will 'cure' you!^_^