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| Dysis Raine 2005-05-09 ch 3,  | abuseanother chapter? Please? |
| Verdanii 2004-02-25 ch 3, | abuseOOH, Edea to the rescue? Amusing chapter :) |
| Thimble.island 2004-02-24 ch 3, | abuseAhaha...silly Squall... |
| Evan'sRinoa 2004-02-22 ch 3, | abusehehe. stuborn squall! this is still good. this chappie was short though. but its still good hehe. *feels repetitive* anyways. what gave you the idea for this? what ever it was i wish it'd give me an idea too! well update soon!! Always, ~*Rinoa*~ |
| Thimble.island 2004-02-10 ch 2, | abuseGood and easy read keep it up!! |
| Verdanii 2004-02-10 ch 2, | abuseWhat a charming chapter ;) |
| da punked-out gym bunny 2004-02-09 ch 1, | abuseOff to a good start - and I like your style. You've got a fresh approach to the post-game setting although it's clear you want Quistis to wind up with him - nice "Some of us do" line that makes her perspective clear without her being too forward. And you're close on his attitude of not believing one lick of authority, "And I should have reported to y'all?" Oh yah and *this* is something that you betcha would happen to them: "Aren't you afraid of me," he questioned. "Nope," she answered simply, still eating. Hehe. :D Post me when you have more on this. ^ ^ ~May you do well ~ in whatever world you will be in~ |
| Jill-J 2004-02-09 ch 2, | abuseInteresting. If you continue the story, I'll keep reading! I feel a need to know what's going to happen when the people at Garden see that he isn't dead. //Jill |
| Verdanii 2004-02-08 ch 1, | abuseDead huh. NOT. At least I hope not. Anyway, please do continue. It looks good. |