twas good:D
note, Occlumency is the art of protecting your mind from invasion, Legilimency is the art of invading the minds of others.
personally i think useing Legilimency without a firm grounding in Occlumency might cause insanity as you cant protect your mind from the thoughts, memories and impressions of the mind you are entering.

I'm sad that this story hasn't been updated in forever. :( Way too awesome to stop!

Just awesome, I like the whole chapter

Very awesome this here is

very neat this here chapter is I like how Salazer speaks & thinks @ times. It's also written goodly

Very neat this here is

interesting.

nice

This is a boring MST version of canon events from a dumb Salazar Slytherin. Why would a man in a boys body act like canon Harry. Hopefully he would be smarter than an ignorant eleven year old and act with enough slytherin guile to not do what canon Harry did.

You accidentally wrote "Harry" instead of Salazar once. While nigh inconsequential, it did throw me off a bit.

I honestly have no idea what this story is about. It just doesn't seem to follow a logical, linear path. it really is a good idea, but it doesn't seem to be coming togeather quite right...

this story sucks

>that his hypothesis was 100 correct.

In general, in a story, it is best to spell out numbers, rather than use numerals. And since FFNET has a bad habit of not allowing symbols, you can use the name instead of the symbol: in this case, 'per cent' or 'percent' (both are correct).

No Draco/Salazar(Harry) slash is what I vote for!

Great fic. i liked reading this and hope you update soon plz!