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| Hime-Kagome Higurashi 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThumbs up.Update soon |
| Maadri 2005-07-06 ch 1, anon. | abusewell damn i can answer to that. he's the way he is because... he was born with so many damn DEMONS in his body. and why does everyone keep saying he looks likea girl? MAYBE i havn't totally seen much of him in the anime but in the anime he has eye shadow of some color and his hair doesn't look as messy. his eyes don't look as grave. yeah that might do it. my mom thinks sesshomaru looks like a girl and could be a "cat sister" instead of a dog brother, but honestly i thought inu-yasha was a girl when i saw him on the cover. (don't blame me i didn't see it until i saw tenchi's universe on tv and a girl with inuyasha's hair was in it and i sucked at drawing back then i couldn't tell the difference) *clears throat* definitely NOT boring. oops. just accidently closed my sis's window. oh and the damn discription is RIGHT there under the story title. obviously unless a person that feels they have to read everything and blame you for it comes along only ppl who have naraku interest are gonna read it and even though a part (maybe a big part) of me hates the guy (also what he did to kagura is unforgivable) it's really not that boring. i've been looking for nar/kag and havn't really found one with more than one chapter and that's a triangle so yeah... please continue this fic (do it cuz i don't beg that much really i don't heheh...) as a kid i've always been like a loyal brave character (lol get a hold of that) but on the other hand... i've always done the normal things any other kid has done. (you kno, smush ants with your finger and line em up on teh stove, nose into other people's business, ripped off dolls heads, destroy objects in your sister's room, including chipping a part off a plastic zebra, cussed, even at the age of 7, oh including not seeing anyone as cute until i torture them...) so forgive me for being one of a **. also his life has been succesful...? he's got the shikon jewel of four souls has he? |
| ShadyMinion 2005-03-02 ch 1, | abuseKyaa! I was surfing through your profile and I found this fic. It's soo intriguing! I've read fics before where they mention that Onigumo had not the best past and that bad stuff happened in the past that contributed to turning him into what he became, but this is the first fic that went in-depth and and was so well written! Please consider picking this fic up again. I notcied that it hasn't been updated in over a year. Poor neglected little fic. Update or it won't ever grow and bet bigger and...(basically treat it like a little baby!) The baby needs you! (ok, I creeped myself out there, but still, please update this.) |
| *squeak* 2004-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseyeah, continue. sounds pretty interesting. I kinda want to know where you're going to go with this, like right now, but I also am kind of sick of knowing almost exactly whats going to happen in fanfiction, so...maybe you shouldn't say. Oh well, I'll stop worrying about it and just read it, assuming that you continue it . . . By the way, the name that I signed with (*squeak*) is a reference to my clarinet, NOT a mouse. Just so you know. |
| vipper902 2004-02-14 ch 1, | abuseI do like this story. The idea is completely original, a bio bout Naraku. I hope that you will continue with this story, because I am interested in seeing what the next chapters will be like. |
| Ryumasa the Ryuhaitou 2004-02-12 ch 1, | abuseDarn... I was planning something like this myself, only, instead of a diary, it was going to be my thoughts on Naraku's 50-year wait for the Jewel's return, the prologue being the fabled events of Inuyasha and Kikyo's deception. Would you mind if I did that? I don't want to be accused of plagerism, as rampant or obscure as it is. |
| Byjinder 2004-02-08 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease oh please, do not give up on this story. It is so awesome and I could totally relate to the slug paragraph because I've done it numerous times. I think it's really interesting and I really would like to see how you explain in your own way, why Naraku is the way he is. I truly cannot wait to see the next installment of BB. |