bittersweet end

Huh?!?!?!

Possibly, yet I wouldn't count my chickens before they hatched.

Um, V.A., do you know what is going on here?

I also read the first Urban Nosgoth and I just have to say, Wow.. The stories are so well written with so much suspence and all that stuff that comes with suspence. Probably the only stories I've ever read one after the other :P Sat at the computer for at lease 3 hours reading them XD.

Appaulse for you!

Oh dear LORD that was depressing . . . and very, very good. Maybe a touch incoherent towards the end, but it fit the state Rhianna was in. Just . . . waugh. O_O

What?! It ends? Like this? I'm shocked! What happens next? Can't Rhianna ever catch a break? You are planning a sequel right? Or will it have to wait until the next LoK game? Where we (hopefully) will see Raziel return. Perhaps that's a silly hope to have?

Anyway, the entire fic was brilliant. You weren't crowned queen for nothing. :)
The suspense is nearly nerve-wracking, and even if I hoped for a happier ending, you're the author. I have two words for you: Keep writing! Please? Pretty please with strawberries?

good ending i liked it. this was really great and i look forward to anything else you decide to put up in future.

Just woah. I really enjoyed this fic. I hope that we will see more fics from you soon. ;)

Very bleak ending, especially for you, but I did like it. Rhianna's last ditch attempt at making things right was leaving me curiously unsatisfied, and then you introduced the coin. A masterstroke. I loved the ending too, the 'wistful glee' in the elder god's voice,I could just hear him speaking those words as I read :)
The original dialogue you wrote for Kain after Raziel's demise, was simply exceptional. Poignant, world weary, mature, and beautifully written. A triumph.

Nice Ending. But will it become a trilogy. Yes? No! Yes! NO! Whatever, it's still a good fic.

. . . NO! NONONONONONO! That is NOT FAIR! SO unfair! The EG CAN'T do that! YOU can't do that! (Well actually you can but still...) GAH! T_T It was great! You are a VERY cool writer! =^_^= I look forward to your next masterpiece.

Very dark ending there, VA - that's not like you! What happened to fluffy bunnies and 'it's all in my head'?! Heh, not that I'm complaining!
This chapter was as twisted and realistic as ever - most enjoyable! Oh, and by the way, the end was your piece de resistance - the use of the coin spinning as Rhi passed on was the perfect ending of a magnificently dark chapter in Nosgothic fanfiction.
So *rubs hands together in anticipation* What's next? ;)

Oh my god, I can't believe it's over. These two stories have become some of my favorite stories of all time. What a way to end them, too. The ending sort of gave me the feeling of vertigo, it's so ethereal. I think only one word can describe this story. Magic. You captured the emotions of the characters so well that it feels like you were there with them. I hope this story goes down in histroy as one of the best fanfics written, ever.
Pure magic.

Wow. Some ending!
She sure takes a lot of beating! Brilliant story, the whole thing!