love the story, i can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon

update soon so we all could see what is missing or feeling quite not right i wish u good luck on ur story

Luv the story pleaz continue im cant wait im dieing in suspense.

oh sounds very intresting. Please update soon! :)

nice chapter, but why is it soo short? it wasn't even interesting!

good chapter, but plz no more cliffhangers!
*waterworks on* *begging on knees* *puppy dog eyes*

You don't need to put that "(hence the title)" in the summary. Your readers are smart enough to guess why you entitled it that way.
Your readers are smart and they can pretty much think for themselves. You only explain stuff when facts get a little vague but not the obvious ones.

Well, this was an interesting concept for sure. The onyl thing is, you're telling the story as if you are rushing to leave lol. Try and slow down, tell a few more details and make the character's feelings more obveous in your writing. Looking forward to the next chapter!