This is really good. Another alternative ending isn't it. A second chance. Yes, I love it! Please do continue. I'm not sure what Seishirou's reaction will be though. Will he be nice? Hope to see that when u update again.

*twitch* Viv...
I envy you! I hate you! Ar!
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Nice start to this fanfic! The premise (from what I can tell from the summary and preview) looks to be quite interesting indeed.
You manage to capture Subaru's hopelessness perfectly. The atmosphere in this chapter was so barren and empty, but like Subaru. Great job there!
I do hope you write up the next chapter soon! This looks to be so good!