 lightblue-Nymphadora 2007-12-19 . chapter 1Nice. Drated up, but nice :D... |
 Rei Hino Scout Of Fire 2007-08-20 . chapter 1O the irony!! |
 Briiiing 2007-05-21 . chapter 1This bordered on typical somewhere around the middle, but there's something about the writing style, and especially the ending that held it up. It was so chillingly written, and while Bellatrix's insanity was a tad unconvincing, she still managed to be gloriously frightening. The shift of control was so fantastically done-- close to perfect. Definitely one of the better darkfic one-shot's that I've read. |
 Varadrovia 2005-09-17 . chapter 1...
bellatrix is tonk's aunt. |
 millie-mione 2004-12-27 . chapter 1 awesome! |
 Bellatrix S.B. Lestrange 2004-04-22 . chapter 1 I like it! You should really update i really liked it...take care! |
 Briana Rose 2004-03-19 . chapter 1Very deep. Update soon.
~bri |
 Padfoot the Marauder 2004-02-13 . chapter 1Love it! Update!
Just one little mistake you made: When Tonks morphs, Bella first sees Alice, then Voldemort, then Alice again. I think you misplaced this line:
"Alice?" she whispered. "Alice Longbottom?".
Go check and you’ll see what I mean. No biggy, it’s just confusing. |
 seeker 2004-02-09 . chapter 1 excellent |