 lightblue-Nymphadora 12/19/07 . chapter 1Nice. Drated up, but nice :D... |
 Rei Hino Scout Of Fire 8/20/07 . chapter 1O the irony! |
 Briiiing 5/21/07 . chapter 1This bordered on typical somewhere around the middle, but there's something about the writing style, and especially the ending that held it up. It was so chillingly written, and while Bellatrix's insanity was a tad unconvincing, she still managed to be gloriously frightening. The shift of control was so fantastically done- close to perfect. Definitely one of the better darkfic one-shot's that I've read. |
 Varadrovia 9/17/05 . chapter 1...
bellatrix is tonk's aunt. |
 millie-mione 12/27/04 . chapter 1 awesome! |
 Bellatrix S.B. Lestrange 4/22/04 . chapter 1 I like it! You should really update i really liked it...take care! |
 Briana Rose 3/19/04 . chapter 1Very deep. Update soon.
bri |
 Padfoot the Marauder 2/13/04 . chapter 1Love it! Update!
Just one little mistake you made: When Tonks morphs, Bella first sees Alice, then Voldemort, then Alice again. I think you misplaced this line:
"Alice?" she whispered. "Alice Longbottom?".
Go check and you’ll see what I mean. No biggy, it’s just confusing. |
 seeker 2/9/04 . chapter 1 excellent |