i like it very much very good

Temari seems a little soft and more feminine in this. It shows a side rarely seen in fanfiction, and ever rarer is it explored like it is in this. I like it.

very good loved it, it would be nice if you could do a oneshot from naruto's point of view, well done

its surprising how narutem, which has, i'll admit, never even crossed my MIND can seem so RIGHT when you write it. ^__^

~Thorn

gorgeous.. sweet and incredibly written

It was a very good story. I like this pairing oh so much. I wish more people would write about them.

This was.. GREAT!

The way you described it was just plain wonderful, though Temari sounds a bit too possesive.

"I was raised to be a strong shinobi, a warrior - why instead am I feeling like some weak little love sick girl?"

Fantastic.

man (sniff) that was good...man any way I wonder do you think they will ever be a couple

awsome fic. There's not enough of this pairing out there.

good story. I hope you decide to write a sequel.

Argh! I felt that there should be more!

NE ways, nice fic.

i want more chaps! i dont want it to end. i just dont want it to be a oneshot. but i guess it is, wish that it wasnt though

AARGH! DAMN you know how to raise the feelzz! nice going! the only thing that bothers me is the shortness of the story (/me cries out over the lost feel of reading this FF)

That was NOT OOC. There isn't enough on her in the anime/manga to show that she couldn't feel this way. Hee hee. How she described the other girls is hilarious. Later.

really good. u should write a narutem fic