*sigh*That story wuz so romantic...Yami's so sweet! I wish i had a BF (boyfriend) like that...Lol!I luv ur story! Keep up da gud work Jupiter Angel!

Cute. I have this odd feeling that if you just delete the "Serena" part of her name (and flesh out certain areas of the story in which you lightly brushed over a fairly lengthy timeframe) you could publish it as an original work since she's very OOC - cannon Serena is a border-line student who klutzes out, not a straight-A student that's a cheerleading captain. ;

I got a bit confused with one part though. Yami proposed to Serena in the middle of their schoolyear - 2 weeks after she started school there. You imply they were married the summer after the schoolyear ended so that means she's about 17 or 18 when they married. Two years after this wedding, Serena is magically now 29. How'd that happen?

Oh and is Yami also Vegeta? I think I ran into that question too when I read through the story. And where did she come from before she moved to Santa Barbara?

Ack I didn't mean for this review to be such a downer. O_o Its a good story, just needs be ironed out a bit. -

That's was a pretty good story. I loved it! Very cute though sad at some parts! Thanks for reading and reviewing my story Blind Target! I'm glad you liked it!

it certainly is interesting, I like it and hope you cintinue I see no flaws that are too big. but the one thing that confuses me is it's well, Confusing,Is it a GW SM or even YGO crossover?