great fic! it really is pretty cool, w/ the shinigami stuff... ^.^ update soon!

*~tsukiko~*

Wow. Just... wow. I can honestly say that this is my favorit fanfic I've read so far. I LOVE your writing style. Although the personalities of the characters were drastically different, I found that it suited them in a weird way. *glomps Yuki* His "advice" to Tohru was simply priceless. ALthough there were a few grammar mistakes, to be honest, I didn't even notice them while I read until after someone pointed them out and I read over. It's such a gripping story.

Also, may I venture a guess as to why Tohru chose the name Ruki? Was it because it sounds the same as "Rookie" and Yuki has a hard time remembering her name? Dunno if someone else has guessed, but I found that just too sweet.

Okies, I'll stop obsessing about it. ^_^ Keep up the good work, 'k? If you're aspiring to be an author, I'm rooting for you, because I really believe that this writing is better than a lot of published books I've read.

Alright, who's this idiot of a writer who keeps on reporting your stories? I mean, come on! S/he is just jealous! That's so stupid! Instead of reporting, then they could just learn from this wonderful piece of writing!

Anyways, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story so much! If you were to discontinue it, I'd cry for days! I'd probably never write again. _ _...

BUT! Please keep on writing, be it on mediaminer or here, on So please continue. I'll check your profile on mediaminer every now and then.

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I love Momiji, and him being an Angel suits him so well. I love this story ^o^

What kind of perspective are you aiming at? It just keeps on bouncing from first person to past tense to narrative... it's confusing. Are you meaning to do that?

"Touch me, and I'll show you how flexible the human spine really is."

I laughed so hard at that. You really are great at humor.

You are so awesome!! ^o^ I know that I will enjoy this fic. Thanx so much for writing it! I feel lke it's Christmas whenever I stumble upon a good Fruba fanfic. *gives you a Christmas card in the middle of summer* w00t! ^o^ ^_^ ^.^ ^.~

ARRGHH!! WHEN WILL U UPDATE THIS? C'MON!! I REALLY LIKE THIS FIC N PLEASE O PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE!

And yes, Yuki-kun was acting like an ** again. And not.

Right. He’s either ‘hot or cold’

Ah, Tohru-kun angsts. How cute.

Um, just something to tell you, but shouldn’t it be just ‘matter-of-fact’ instead of ‘a-matter-of-fact’

Well, that’s it.

Kyaa. What can I say? That was good, although there were a lot of errors.

And well, Yuki-kun comes off as a complete ** at the beginning, but reassuring Tohru-kun like that erased whatever negative feelings he might have brought out by his earlier actions.

I was rooting for Kyou-kun when they were fighting, but that’s impossible and I know it.

Aw, I was hoping it would be Yukiru. And it does seem to be open, because Kyou-kun seems to like Kagura-san, though he doesn’t seem to be showing it the way a normal person would. But they aren’t people, they’re Shinigami.

At any rate, Kyou-kun doesn’t seem to dislike Kagura-san as much even though Kagura-san’s still clingy. ^_^

Yeah, the chapter was a bit slow… Wah! Tomoe is waiting for explanations! Too many puzzles, too many puzzles!

This one's for the next chapter and the review for that chapter should be for this chapter instead. Am I making sense? I'm sorry. I got mixed up doing the reviews...

It could use a lot of editing and I noticed at one point that Tohru-kun said ‘Kyou-kun’ instead of Kyou-san.

But, the story’s progressing nicely. ^_^

Uh, some errors in grammar, some deleted words.

But the story seems to be going nicely.

Where’s my Yuki-kun?

No complaints about grammar, structure whatsoever, so I’ll just say, this is a great prologue.

Wow... this fanfiction is really blossoming into something beautiful! Heh, I think someone reccommended your fanfics... I think it was HelloKat? Heh, if she did, She's definitely right about your fics!