its really good

Beautiful.

wow, i wasn't expecting that. i think you've got talent i await you next accomplishment.

(i sound like an old noblemen! - .-'[thats me swaetdropping{if you didn't know}])

*claps* poetic and beautiful. We need more fanfiction like this.

I DON'T like Itachi with Naruto. I don't like Itachi hurting Naruto.
But what I don't like doesn't matter. You're still a great writer. Very beautiful story. Wodnerful play with words. Eloquently weaved. What else is there to say?

Naruke: WHOEVER YOU ARE, STOP HURTING NARU-CHAN!
Shikamaru: Um...let me guess...it was Itachi and Naruto?

very interesting...I like. You have amazing ways with words.

i love itachixnaruto fic *_*
and this one is really nice
will you make more fic on this couple?

OK, Now i KNOW 3rd is Itachi... Err, I think aone of them is Gaara and Another Sasuke- BUt other than that i am clueless. Very good though. Mabey i'm just to blond. :P Ok anyways. You GOTTA tell me what each one is casue i will go crazy. And i was to lazy to sign in, but Esachasa is me pen name!

AH! *grabs itachi and shakes him* YOU KILLED SASUKE AND NOW UR RAPING NARUTO! WHAT?
*crashes to the floor and faints permanently*
p.s. sorry if im missing the whole point of the story ;