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| Dodger Gilmore 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseI liked this! You write Jess great. Very much better than the episode. |
| Holly Gilmore 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abuseAh! That was so good. You wrote Jess's thoughts so, so well. Their "conversation" at the end was just perfect. The little bits about Lorelai, both in Rory's rant and Jess's thoughts were just... so true. lol. Great ficlet! |
| Darrah 2005-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseAWH! that was EXACTLY what i wished had happened when the episode aired. i would love it you'd continue this! im sure lit fans would love to know what would have happened if they would actually had a talk! ♥ well even if you dont write a sequel, which you should!!, it was awesome! :) |
| selina 2005-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abusewonderful, wonderful. gosh why couldn't you have switched bodies with ASP and make things right in the world of Stars Hollow, and please every Lit in the world by getting Rory&Jess back togehter. |
| saourise 2004-02-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw it's so nice. the single "Okay" from Jess and Rory's infinite compassion for all living things... so true so sweet.please continue. |
| saourise 2004-02-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw it's so nice. the single "Okay" from Jess and Rory's infinite compassion for all living things... so true so sweet.please continue. |
| someone5 2004-02-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really good fic. I like your ending better...lolz. |
| kisstherain 2004-02-10 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was awesome. Really. My story for that ep... wasnt. Lol. "Well, I'm breathing, so I figure it's a pretty good day." Thats totally Jess. Thats a really good line. Lol. You could totally continue this. If you wanted that is. Anyways, great story. -Gail |
| boo-frickity-hoo 2004-02-10 ch 1, anon. | abusethe entire time i watched this episode on tv, i was praying that this exact scene would happen. it didnt. why? because the gg writers arent nearly as kickass as you. i love this fic (too short!) if you could, please continue. or write a sequel or something; its great. |
| smile1 2004-02-10 ch 1, | abuseHey! I haven't seen that episode yet and I'll that that I'll see it soon, but reading this chapter made me realize that maybe I don't even wanna see that episode, because this story might just be the perfect substitude. It was excellently written, which is key in my eyes and the fact that Rory decided to take him home with her was a surprising and original ending. I hope you continue as soon as you can. Bye, smile :-) |