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thechickenlittle 2007-03-06 ch 10,	abusewow! i can't wait to read the rest!
TFRiD Queen 2004-06-30 ch 13,	abusejaw drops Oh my god, this story is soo god!! and long too! big smile ahh, i can't believe i didn't notice this earlier! bangs head on table anyway, wow, i just have to say that, i have never read such a fic like this before! everything was well organized and planned, also good character developement! ^_^
Ciaran Gabriel 2004-06-09 ch 13,	abusesniff It's...sniff sniffle OVER! BWAH!! Yay for happy endings! Yay for fanservice! lol. You made Jiro laugh! I'm so happy you put that in your story. Yes, although everyone has their moments, this is really a story about Ichiro and Arai. You developed Ichiro's character so well, it feels like unquestionable canon. One suggestion...It allow the story to have a better dramatic arc if the last part was put into a prologue, or something... It's not a big deal, though.
Feirdra 2004-06-09 ch 13,	abuseWAAH... SO LONG. @.@ It took me a while to get my brain rebooted and finish reading, gomen. BUT... I HAVE FINISHED. -nod- - I really liked this chapter! Although it was slightly open (the best kind of ending!!), it was a HELL of a lot more conclusive than Kikaider, the series. And I'm glad you gave Karakuri some closure near the end... I was wondering where he went in that Arai/family/Aya scene!! ^^; - It was a very cute chapter after all the action/angst (yay for rice and matchmakers!! XDv), what with the weddings and the groping (LOL!) and all. Ichiro is just adorable and so clueless, poor guy. I lurves the character development you gave him in this chappie. ichiglompsh - Just one question: the wedding of Jiro/Mitsuko was pretty sudden and quite quickly done... how much time passed between this and the end of the series, exactly? I was just a little surprised, is all. But the wedding stuff was HILARIOUS; go Arai! XDv - I adore your OCs. -hugglez- And the Toru/Miyuki was background but fleshed out enough to be interesting. Gunta and his piccies!! XD -dances- I want copies o' those!! I-chan must draw! Somebody! Sombody!! XDv - Wonderful ending to a wonderful story! ^-^b (although little oneshot sequels wouldn't go amiss...) - ~Fyredra~
Ciaran Gabriel 2004-06-05 ch 11,	abuseI'm late reviewing this chapter, but I must say I really enjoyed the Mitsuko/Jiro fluffiness (yay!) and the whole part from Aya's passing to the end was incredibly emotional and well written. ^o^
Yukikaima 2004-06-05 ch 13,	abuse"…How'd you like to be an aunt?" ~ That is the BEST proposal I've ever seen. Adorable. Just flat out wonderful. ^O^ ~~ Other than that, I really can't say much else now. It's all over. ;_; I'll miss it. But it was a great fic, and I love the fact you gave us a decent ending that wasn't depressing as sin. Your ending had hope and promise. That's always appreciated in a time where it seems others are more fond of writing angst. ~_~;; ~~ Hehe... ::reading the last line:: Now for me to actually look over it and post that fic. _^_!!
BlackyGirl 2004-06-03 ch 13,	abuseI really really liked this story. You are very good at writing. Your story was INCREDIBLY good. It was funny and it cheered me up.
Kigai Okasu 2004-06-03 ch 13,	abusesniff That was beautiful! You ended your story perfectly! I really enjoyed reading it.
Aknol 2004-06-03 ch 13,	abuseTenniyo, that was beautiful! You managed to tie every element of your story together so well in the end. Ichiro just can't keep his hands to himself, can he? He must want to milk the experience for all it's worth (pun intended). :-) It's rare for someone to dedicate a fan fiction to a story that he or she reveres. It's even harder to come across one that's written well. Rarer still is the one who completes it as a seamless vision. Bravo, Tenniyo.
x.angel.of.faith.x 2004-05-30 ch 12,	abuseT.T I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in so long, and when I do, it's short and fairly irrelevant... but all I have to say is OMG!!1~! This story has been so great... I'm sad that the next chapter is the last one. u_u;
Aknol 2004-05-26 ch 12, anon.	abuseAw, calm down, BlackyGirl. For someone who most likely has final exams right now, she's updating quite frequently. If you want to complain about someone not updating, then yell at me. :-) Good grief...that chapter had everything in it! Yes, it was lengthy, but it kept me engaged, which is more important than the number of typed pages. You're focusing more now on the development of Ichiro than Jiro. Is this because you believe Jiro is more fullfilled than Ichiro, or Jiro's story arc is resolved to a greater extent than Ichiro's? Or is it just something that worked itself into the story as you were writing it? It's a surprising choice, although it works. I didn't see everything coming for Arai. Poor girl, she gets picked on more than a sorority inductee during a hazing. The conclusion, I'm sure, will be wonderful.
BlackyGirl 2004-05-26 ch 12,	abuseThats it. Ive had it with you hardly ever updating and then, when you DO update, putting upo an annoying chappy with lousy things happening and an evil cliffie at the end. (even though it wasnt much of a cliffie). My little sister now has access to the proboards. And she will torment all Kikaider fans!
Kigai Okasu 2004-05-26 ch 12,	abuseWhoa! That's a lot of action and suspense! Hurry with the next chapter!
Yukikaima 2004-05-26 ch 12,	abuseWell, just one chapter left, and I still can't decide one a favourite chapter. That's actually a good thing, Hun. ^^;; When I pick a favourite that means you were lacking in some areas. When I can't pick it means you kept your pace of whatever worked throughout. Always good. ~~ Anyhow, as for this chapter, the children get to do something! CHII!! And I'm thrilled to watch Akira develope as he has and break out a bit more. He deserves his moments, after all. That, and I love what you did with Rieko too, and teaming them up together. She's brought Akira out of himself, and what she wasn't able to do, Masaru has or will. A great team of friends. ~~ Good way to close things between Yuuki, Shiro and Arai. Lots of action, a little redemption, and closure, most of all. ::heavy sigh:: There's a lot in this chapter. Long...long... ^O^; I'm trying to think of anything I might not have said before, but there's little to say at this point. Most of the loose ends are tied up, ect... Or I've already stated upon my previous reading...
Feirdra 2004-05-26 ch 12,	abuseYAH~~ First review. =3 - pokes Yatta with TEH STICK OF DOM You be evil. You leaving us hanging like that. =_= pokepoke But this was really a nice, well-stuffed chapter, although it still seemed to pass a little quickly for my liking. poutpout Action-packed chapters tend to do that. But I wuv it anyways!! ^-^v - XDD I didn't notice anything in the letter either, so Arai is not alone in being stoopid. bonks self over head Inattentive, oblivious little Fyre that I am. X3 - Teh good stuff: ICHIRO AIRTIME. XD Even though he did get knocked out, he made up for it with his random explosions and thingamajigs, and teh development of the Gemini really came to a peak, I guess, in the scene where Shiro was controlling him. ;_; But dammit, Arai... - ARAI IS AN IDIOT. XDD Well, an interesting idiot, but still an idiot, as in one of those idiots who are all self-sacrificing and crap and... what's with the falling star/explosion anyways? Freaky... what was it, a satellite or something? So inexplicable at the moment. - KARAKURI. happy tears I love the direction in which you took his character, even though it was inevitable that he would revolt against Shiro anyway, I still love the way he revolted. So... APPROPRIATE. X3 And a little tragic, I guess... I mean, to treat your own nephew like some kind of servant/slave/toy/... Ah! No! Crooked, crooked thought process. X3 - A little tragic? Heck... ;_; I feel bad for this kid, really. But he's great. You're right, he and Ichiro are total opposites, but when it comes down to it, they both know when to be serious. ^-^ Ooh, I love that element of their personalities. - And finally... GANBATTE, MASARU~~! XDv The kid absolutely rocked in this chapter, and Akira can see... through... metal...? 0.o Was probably mentioned before, but Fyre forgot. pokes additional holes in memory - Ooh, and a little cheer for Mitsuko for standing up for herself, tho it was a tad useless and she just kinda got in the way just a bit with Shiro there. Hey, how do them fans work, anyway? Do they send out air and just plain cut or what? - Aiie, Fyre is rambling. XD This was a fun chapter, but you left us NOT UNDERSTANDING ENOUGH AT THE END. foamfoam - XD Great stuff!! ^^v - ~Fyredra~

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