All I can say is wow. A truly great read, one of the best fanfic's (hell scrap fanfics just stories in general) I have ever read. You managed to make it realistic (as far as dbz goes), intimat and highly entertaining.I ecspecially (sp?) liked how you didn't portray Hercule as a complete bastard, made it much better in my opion. Can't wait to check out more of your great work, you've really got a talent for this.
Thanks so much for writing this, have a great day (like Gohan ;))

wow,your such a talented writer. I love your stories! And I'm glad everything went alright with your wife and newborn child. My best wishes!

Wow...that was a great story...Like I read the entire thing half a dozen times... Except for the lemon, this should be, like, some kinda Dragonball Z movie. The lemon part was really well written. I don't know how you did it, but You really got me stuck on this story.

Read "Sticks and Stones." It's another great GohanVidel fic.

Nice Story man.. Love it.

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Its very good just if you tried real hard it would be even better.

From Tayyib Shah

this is really really really really really really really re-healy cool!

oh that was so good please let me know when you have more cause i would love to read more and hurry with it too!!

I'm stating to like you...'re writings... They r really AMAZING!

I love your story/ies, and I think there is nothing you should change... but, The names of three certain characters have been in my mind for a little while now. you know Eraser (/Eresa/Elisa), Sharpner and the geek that's always with them (Barry)... You might have noticed where did A. Toriyama come up with names like 'Eraser' and 'Sharpner' (well OBVIOSLY!). I don't mean to be annoying or anything else like that, but many fanfic writers have chosen to name the "Four eyed nerd", you named Barry, Pen... You know, Eraser, Sharpener and Pen... you get the point, right... anyway, I just wanted to tell u that... sorry for being such a dick... (If there are any "mis-spellings, or whatever, in what I just wrote, in my defence: English isn't my native... how do you say... tounge or language...)

Umm... Hercule did see when Goku and Vegeta transformed on the planet of Kaiooshin, right? And before that he saw Veget (, Vegeto, Vegito, which one you prefer...) in his transformed state! So why was he so surprised, when he saw Gohan go ssj?

Simply beautiful! This story is getting better by the second. first the "snogging", and now Hercules gonna' get his ** kicked!... well, probably. HOPEFULLY!

Now, this disturbs me a little... Videl explains to Gohan (in your story) how Hercule helped Goku 'n Vegeta on the planet of Kaiooshin, as if he (Gohan) didn't know anything about it. But he (Gohan, again) was already alive AND awake when Hercule did that, and he (you know who...) also gave them some of his energy! So why has he now got a sudden amnesia...? hmm...?

mhm... well... it was better than average...

I've loved all of your other stories. So I'll most likely love this one as well. We'll have to see eh?!

And thus I begin...

Hilarious, although Hercule always seemed a little less pig-headed to me during and after the Majin Buu saga, when he actually realized how strong people could be. Nonetheless, it was high time for him to get a real demonstration.

You commented during this chapter that Goku transformed even further than Gohan. That's not necessarily true. After the Elder Kai unlocked Gohan's full potential, he was able to call upon the full theoretical limit of his power without transforming. This is arguably superior to any Super Saiyan form, as SSJ transformations can be difficult to control, and consume energy at a more rapid pace. Simply put, Ultimate Gohan > SSJ3 anyone