Great chapter, can't wait for the next!

This is good; I never thought of putting Sirius with Lucius and Bellatrix at first. It adds a twist. But I like this though. ~Sota

Blake is kinda useless to the plot. Personally I think you should either 1)kill him off 2)expell him for going too far into a prank 3)have him be the kid that get's his eye poked out by the whomping willow, like Remus said in the 3rd HP book. If you use number 3 then he will actually be useful.

o another marauder?? interesting. HI! NEWBIE HERE! luv your fanfic!! plz update soon! great work! i am planning a story by putting other ppl's ideas into the story. I AM NOT A CHEAT! u will hardly notice it at all. not working very well though. exams coming up. sigh. UPDATE SOON!

There are lots of new characters here, but I guess that's nessicary when we've only been given ten or so cannon ones. Either way your new characters aren't annoying and I do so love this story. I like the idea of what happened back then and this is one of the better renditions of the time period.

Please continue this story.

LLS & DRE

of course.. I enjoyed it!! Great job :D!

2 things, one, blake has to die or something, 2, SIRIUS? JAMES sirius best friends,

:)i think you really did james justice but i think that sirius could have had a bigger part in this chapter... all together it was really great chapter.
~P~

Love, love, love it! Update REALY soon!

OOH, so much stuff to think about! I love the Snape/Willow competition, it should be interesting when they're adults, ;D
I'm kind of scared, though...PLEASE tell me you're not going to kill Blake! I mean, it sounds like you're about to make him a Marauder, but unless you're going AU, there never was a Marauder # 5 named Blake...aah! BLAKE! *sob*
Greatness achieved, woman! Just keep it up! :D

lol, and here comes Evans, makes a nice sweeping turn and - WAIT A MINUTE, DID SNAPE JUST FALL OFF HIS BROOM?! *all turn to stare at Snape, who is incidentally still on his broom and glaring at James* YES, HE DID! AND THE CROWD GOES WILD!
hem hem, anyhoo... lol
most excellent, I've recomended this fic to my pal Emily, but I dunno if she'll review cuz we share the same account, and she'd have to review chapters one or two, haha, sucker.
"The results were as I had expected," He passed out their quizzes, most prominent were the red check marks. "You each failed miserably."
I told Emily about that, lol. My fave part.
lol, so post more soon!
Remick

`eLLo =] wow! great story ^^ keep updating often, but i really don`t know where your plot is going... o.0

blake instead of black or what are you tryin to do here?

I hate how everyone gets this wrong, they always put Hagrid as leading the first years to Hogwarts on the boats even when its a maurauders story. Hagrid was in their class, the same age as them...don't you people remember?

*Girl falls through hole in the ceiling, stands up, dusts off her robes and grins around at the stunned crowd*
Lol, hey, I just read your fic here and decided to drop in (literally) and tell ya that it's the single most incredible piece of priceless literary brilliance that I have ever had the blessed fortune to stumble ever so blindly upon. Actually, it's not, but it is a very good fic! lol!
Post soon! So far I would rate your fic... 5794/78. In case anyone was wondering, yes, I did fail my last math test. But I aced the test I gave myself on HP! So, ha!
Again, plz plz plz post soon! Or I'll pull a Weasley and come after you with a very lethal looking hunk of metal. Lol!
Insincerely,
Remick (aka Abby)