Takes Superman/Clark Kent in a direction too far removed from the character as known. Clark and Superman work as separate individuals because Clark is someone who doesn't stand out. Having too many powers is a disaster waiting to happen for both identities.

Whoo! I liked it! Keep writing stories like this!

Only one problem.

The spacing is screwed up on here right now.

I liked it, but it would have been a little easier to read with better spacing.

Sorry, but what was the point? And 'Clarkie'... uggh!