Oh man, that wrenches my heart out! I love Will and Lyra! Great job, but you totally crushed my spirits yet agian. i cant even read the end of AS most times because i break down! please write more!

aw, so sad. u had to end it there?! Oh well, i still love ur story and i love ur ending nonetheless. And yes, daemons do talk to other people besides their masters. Remember when Pan first ttalked to Will and he was so shoked? Oh well. Great story!

You have a very good writing style and used imagery effectively. You paragraphs are lengthy (which is good)compared to other authors and even if you did not add that author's note at the top, readers can se that you are serious about writing this fic. Give yourself a pat on the back! You are one of the limited amount of authors in fanfiction that is actually serious in writing and has a good writing style.

oh that was great. i love it, but i wish they had been able to get together again. oh well, cya later.

WOW! (sorry for lack of a better word, but that's all i can come up with) that was so sad and beautiful. it actually brought tears to my eyes. Keep writing. i am totally looking forward to reading more of your stories.

i'm honestly tearing up! that was so good.

You were able to make me cry. You're fic is the greatest. you're a great writer. L+W 4eva!

o thats so sad...i just about died at the end of that book, ya know? i hate sad endings...lol. well, i loved this story!! u r a totally awesome riter, and dont ever let anyone ever tell you otherwise!

Holy crap. WOW

that was soo good!

My God, that is perhaps the saddest, best fic I have ever read, which is saying a lot. Sorry for the short and worthless reveiw.

its brilliant you should send a copy of your story to philip pullman good luck on future storys

sorry for the name. This made me cry. Very good use of vocab. Very pro-like.

can't wait to read more!
~luv
Gemini Enchantress

It was grand! And well written too! :) Good job!