This a great way to write the meeting of Jarod and his mother. I don't think it would be easy if they meet each other. You did a fantastic job and I understand a little better the beginning of "Guilty" because I read this one after. You are a really good writer.

That's a great story and it's so well and sensitive written.
I can't believe it doesn't have a review yet... ok, now it has one :-)
Now I'll read its sequel... I'm curious what you made out of the scroll-plot.