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mariahe
2009-11-19 . chapter 7
wow I really don't mnow what to say besides I love the way you've taken this story line that's been used so many time's and made it completly your own. I LOVE the way you actually show harry and severus starting to bond and trust eachother and I like the way that you have Neville being the one to back harry up and just in generally be their for him. The friendship you've formed between the two of them is amazing and a delight to read. I espeically liked the way you don't have Neville appear to just be the litte weak boy that everyone picks on. I look forward to reading your future chapters. THANKS! :)
mariahe
Gaaralovessakuraforever
2009-11-11 . chapter 7
sweet
IchigoRenji
2009-10-30 . chapter 7
awsome story, please update soon ^_^
Lolchen
2009-10-03 . chapter 7
Nice story so far! I really liked it. And I would like to know more about those Old Ways and why Molly doesn't like them. Also, Ron and Hermione are in for an argument with Harry. I can see it "I trusted you, you betrayed my trust" (Harry) "So what, what were you doing, invoking the Old Ways" (Ron) "We're sorry, we didn't think it would be a problem. So... what did you do?" (Hermione)
And Uncle Nevlil will stand there and support Harry x3 I really like that name Severus gave him. He's so cute! *squeal*
So, that was one, leaves two more - someone recognizing that maybe Harry could take care of Snape (Malfoy, perhaps? For Snape is his godfather, you know) and the one out for killing Harry (my assumption right now is Theodore Nott, because he attacked him during Potions)
And I wonder what's it's going to be like, once Severus turns older child and then young teen. Most interesting thoughts...
Lol, Dumbledore, the Slytherin! xD So un-canon, but a nice change for once.
Hm, you haven't updated in quite a while, so I assume university is still keeping you busy, but I would love for you to update someday! Just tell me if you still want to continue this? Please?
Kitiara Woodbane
2009-09-20 . chapter 7
This is really origional! it's amazing, and i can't wait to read the next bit! please update asap!
jaywolfe
2009-08-25 . chapter 7
I seriously hate you and I honestly can tell you that I have a huge amount of dislike towards you. Why oh why have you abandoned this story?! I mean, I was so into the story and loving every word and every action and every person and then I find that you haven't updated in two years?! I want my update now! PLEASE?!

I promise I'll do anything you say if you just update! I beg of you!
mooree
2009-07-29 . chapter 7
How could you stop updating? this story was amazing!
Oya
2009-07-20 . chapter 7
This has been so interesting, I hope you update soon.
almightyswot
2009-07-09 . chapter 7
OMG this is amazing must fav this immediatly
please update soon!
DARK KITTEN
2009-06-09 . chapter 7
R U EVER GOING 2 FINISH THIS? I'M SRRY, BUT THIS THE 50TH TIME I'VE SENT A REVIEW, AND 2 B HONEST I'M GETTING IMPATIENT
PS: PLS E-MAIL UR ANSWER TO

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Rori Potter
2009-05-03 . chapter 7
That was great. Update soon.
Demonic the fox' Sonica' Foxie
2009-03-19 . chapter 7
please continue. I can't wait to read more.
ArabellaKye
2009-02-15 . chapter 7
OMG! This a totally freaking awesome! FANTASTIC JOB! I LOVE THIS! PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE! I AM BEGGING YOU! THIS ROCKS! Please, please, please,please,please,please,please, please update! Cheers!
DARK KITTEN
2009-02-12 . chapter 7
PLS,PLS,PLS,PLS,PLS,PLS,PLS, FINISH THIS IT'S ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! I'M REALLY LOVE READING ABOUT BABY!SEVERUS AND HARRY SO WILL U PLS CONTINUE THIS 4 ME
PLS E-MAIL ME UR ANSWER

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LoveYouFred
2009-02-05 . chapter 7
Question... ARE YOU CONTINUING WITH THIS STORY!?!?!? Please do!! It's amazing!! *puppy dog eyes*
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