Once again, i've tears in my eyes...this was another beautiful story by you. You really are a talented author, keep it up *thumbs up* and please continue to write more G/CC fics.

Aww, that was pretty sweet. :)

But even though you explained before hand when and where the story takes place, I was still a little confused and lost. It just started and you have no idea where they are 0.o But that's okay I guess, it was still nice. Keep up the good writing

Wiggle-Chicken

Awe so sad yet so haunting too, good thing the baby doesn't understand the words or I think he would be a bit creeps out. Anyway I really liked it, it was good and I hope there are more stories, poems or song fics like it.

Aww...beautiful. That was absoloutly beautiful. *sniffle*

That was so sad and cute!

Very deep and sad.

i hate these kind of stories! They make me cry *sniffs grabs a tiseu* I realy *sniffs* like it, but it makes me cry _

Awwww once again you have moved me! WONDERFUL!

I loooooooved it! Well done!

Sad story. Sad, sad story.

awww...*sniff* poor chi-chi! that's so sad, and heartwarming. Although it was short I loved it nonetheless. It was short and sweet. Keep it up!

You make it seem so natural that the two things - the story and ChiChis corresponding thoughts - belong together that at times I felt...you must have written both the lyrics and the thoughts. It wouldn't have surprised me in the least - you seem to have that kind of talent. Very touching little story - you capture so much in few words. I admire your ability to do that, I think explaining things overly so is a weakness of mine in writing. Thanks for sharing this story.

*eyes water* *sniff* That was.. was... VERY good. Touching and just so so, I can't find the words for it even. All I can say is that that was a beautiful peice doa-chan.

Oh my god... I find no word/words good enough to describe this...

Daughter of Ashes, you are a very talented author, and I'd like you to know that I thank you for writing this story and for sharing this extraordinary song. I will probably always remember this story.

Thank you.

** sniff sniff*

i can only say BEAUTIFUL! *grabs for a box of kleenex*

Hey, this is great- really :) And as a fellow fanfic writer I'd like you to see my first songfic, well, actually my first work of fanfiction-period. Be honest please. You'll be surprised to hear it.