wop! that was brilliant!

wop lots of sex! (this is coming from a sex deprived nerd lol!)

The story started out really well but it really got boring into it and the epilgue was pretty good.

dang they are going to have 5 kids
wow can they not stop shagging each other or what lol=]
but hey if they are happy then it's all good.

p.s. it's funny that they never even bother using protecton =]

loved it!

I FINALLY FINISHED IT! Wow that was a long story...
No matter though it was a good one at that.
Great story line, just a tip. Re-read your chapter after you finished writing it, cause i found a few mistakes, i was still able to read it though so its ok.
I know it was a long story, a little bit much fluffy stuff for my liking and there wasnt enough rebel draco in it.lol. he was a bit soft.

LOVED YOUR STORY THOUGH! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!

This story is great but at the end I remembered two kids that I knew in Middle School. Forest and Dominic. Those to boys were so weird. Forest was like the most annoying kid EVER and Dominic was just...plain weird. Either way, this is one of my favorite stories on here. Keep Writing the way you do!
-Melissa

loved the story but i can't help but feel it was a bit brief at parts, do u no wat i mean
anyway the only other bad point i can think of is i think Gwen should be a slytherin
well done love the story

Hm...Hermione and Draco isn't really my favorite, but because you're SUCH a faithful reviewer and I absolutely love the sweet reviews you leave, I'll read it and review every chapter :) I can't do it right now, but the first chapter is lovely :)

that wazz so good nd damn it had a lot of sex in it buhh i luved it(LOL)!

Nice story!

can u not write in there nick names after every sentence?
it makes the whole thing sond unrealistic
and put a bit more distcription in the chareters.not 2 be harsh or any thing just a suggestion:)
pwease don't hate me and do keep up the good work luv the story..."Breaking the Rules"

i really liked this chapter.haha poor draco embarrassing himself like that!! one thing though, im not criticising (sorry cant spell:)) you but its just you tend to say 'then' an awful lot. hope you dont mind just thought you would be better off knowing. anyway great chater.lokking forwad to more!!

sorry, but i have to say this.
your descriptions of Hermione's clothing and make-up in the first couple of chapters aren't so much "hot" but more trashy.
sorry if that's the way you do your make-up and what not but the picture i'm getting in my minds eye reminds me of those little 12 year olds who get all dolled up to go to the mall and end up looking like complete sluts.
that is all.

omg such a cute ending !
put me in such a happy mood!
i am starting to read all your other stories!
you are a fantastic writer!
and i loved this story!