Woohoo, great story! Wendy and Peter are so cute together, discovering smuttyness with each other. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow, they are growing up aren't they? ;) Beautifully written as usual, ah, young lust.

MWAH! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT PETER AND WENDY TOGEATHER WHOHOO! [flying around room agian] keep it up girl! KEEP IT UP! [and i told ya i would reveiw again if u put up another chapter! [lols and accepts both chocolate and puppy from author then gives her hug-thank u! i love all three! [chocolote, puppies, AND OF COURSE THE STORY!] [will be checking my email box for mor updates!]
cheers from a MAJOR peter/wendy fan and a writer herself
x [hugs and hugs and hugs of encouragement]
ps: too bad they don't have peterpan fic awards for i'd nominate you as one of the best peter/wendy writers around! giggles byebye for now! i'll be back of course! [wink]

I don't know why it won't let me sign in. Anyway, again, a wonderfully sweet chapter! You're an excellent writer, but you know that already! It's like... I dunno, the only way I can describe your writing is love. You simply shine in everything you write, and you write so delicately and yeah, I'm babbling. So how old is Wendy about? Sorry, I just saw Miracle in the theatre, and I now I'm so jam packed full of adrenaline! Great job, continue!

Oh you wicked wicked tease...oh oh oh
I can't bare it...or rather I hope that Peter will bare it...Oh please...update now.
Sorry...this is so good...I'm positively blushing...I LOVE IT...what a joy
Write faster...*grin*
Louise
*who should take her own advice and stop reading and do more writing*

Another wonderful chapter! And this one was a bit more intense... Poor Peter, though, being embarrased for the first time. But it was a lovely P/W moment, can't wait 'til he comes back for more!

Indeed, Miss Kimberly_A, I mock you quite merrily. There is no way in hell that you're gonna wrap this up in one chapter. :) I'm betting on two-three more. *giggles*. BWAHAHAHAHAHA. RANDOM COMMENTS: before general ones: THE SNORE THING! HILARIOUS! YES!; "Was it because of his dreams? Was she offended?"-I have MISSED your "stupidfreakout" Peter. The one who thought "She must hate me because...my...FEET SMELL!" Man. That's my favorite characterization of the cute little bugger. Makes me feel downright pedophillic. Golly, he's cute; Okay. Much giggles at the "lighting strikes" and results afterwards. Glad I didn't have to live through that. Jeez. What hell little boys have to live through. GENERAL COMMENTS: Again, this is a K_A chapter that one must read while eating/drinking some sort of vice (peanut m&m's and hot tea were mine). Good lord. I love excellently written smut. So strange to go from LOTR slash to PP puberty-suffering teens. I cannot CANNOT CANNOT wait for what happens next. And yes, I love how you're completely ignoring any plot bunny that would keep Wendy from kissing on Peter ("but it's indecent, i'm a little victorian maiden!" is scrapped for "hellsya! let's go"). YAY.

OMG I LVOE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT! PLEASE PLEASE CONTNUTE PELASE! [begging author to continue for more then three chappies/chapters-wicked grin] if you do i'll reveiw some more...[and is always true to her word] keep up the OUTSTANDING work! [doing happy flipflops in air-aided by pixie dust of course :) - all cause author put up another chapter of this WONDERFUL STORY]

This story is very well written and easy to follow. I love the whole bit about the substance with no name. Writting about Peter Pan can get difficult because most of these fanfics have very similar storylines but I love your perspective of it. Keep it up

Again, very, very good. I like the frankness and innocence of both Peter and Wendy. Can't wait for more!

Oh wow this is starting off great! You know that I love all of you're fics and this one is starting off to be another great one. Please keep up the awesome work and update soon!
Dreamless_Mermaid

Another wonderful begining to another beautiful story about teen love, love it already, because it's not like all the other stories out there... it has a ::gasp:: plot! who'd have thought :-D keep it comin girl, I need something GOOD to read while I'm sick!

Oh I like it, I so want to read more...
This is a subject dear to my heart (I adore this side of the character...as you know!)
Lots more please...*begging, pleading,*
Teehee...thanks Kimberly
Louise
*waiting breathlessly*

Ugh stupid won't let me log in, but I like where this is headed. You write wonderfully, and it will be interesting to see how Peter handles this reaction to his body and his new feelings for Wendy, because they are no longer boyish. Hopefully there will be some smut too ;). Great job, as always

Omg! This is starting out soo god!

Please update soon!
I rate: "Two thumbs up! I'd give it more if I had ne more thumbs!"