My, my, my...you have to hate a reviewer like me who is completely involved in your story, but stops to smell the roses off somewhere else for oh...about 12 chapters, and forgets to check if you updated or not. Sorry, I’ve been really busy with college stuff; I’ve just about driven myself bonkers with all the freshmen paperwork, and now I finally have some downtime before I take off into the real world...

So, why not give you another GINORMOUS review? Chapters 10-21...I actually have to re-read chapters 1-9 so I can remember exactly what’s happening. I guess I wouldn’t really call that a punishment for neglecting the story though, because it’s just so damn good to read...its more like a reward really. Ok, onto the GINORMOUS REVIEW! Have fun reading it.

Chapter 10: I always love how after serious bits of story, a Laguna part can be added in and everything just seems much more pleasant. I never really fully understood why Laguna would leave Squall and Ellone at the orphanage, but your theory in this chapter makes it seem more plausible. And I just HATE the way Ultimeca has altered Seifer...mean to Rajin? Psh, who’s mean to Rajin? Great chapter, not ‘out of place’ at all!

Chapter 11: *GASP* Oh my god he was not about to call Fujin a **! Sorry, I’m still reeling from Seifer’s perfect representation of the world “**

...*stunned teary eyed silence*...Uh, wow. Forget my wanting the first chapter, I want the whole story. I cried so much during this thing for all the horrid things that happened and then turned around and found myself crying for the happy things at the end. I love this story so much. I only regret not finding and reading it sooner so that I could have left more reviews. Geez, how am I supposed to honestly review this thing after reading the last ten chapters straight through? I'm in awe. I love it. This is such a powerful story. Great plot great detatils great characterizations. (especially Laguna) This is really beautiful. Even though parts were aweful,(in a sad teary-eyed kinda way) the happy moments were truly gold. I'll say this one more time before I resolve to sit slightly impatiently at my computer and eagerly wait for an alert that says that you've updated your other fic; I LOVE THIS STORY!

Hey I told you I'd pick this story back up. Sorry it took so long and sorry I had to stop at chapter 4. I really like this fic. I like your writing style...have I told you that before? I know I've thought it. There were a few times that I was just in awe of the way you worded some of your paragraphs. Parts seem so poetic...

I really like Seifer and Fujin as a couple too. You're definitely doing them justice. Can't wait to read the rest of it. I PROMISE to pick it back up tomorrow. I love this story. :)

Wow...That was a really sweet chapter; a really nice ending to such a traumatic and emotional story. I'm truly sad that this story has ended now, but I don't think you could have taken this wonderful piece of work any further. It has been a real pleasure to read this and I look forward to more Seifuus from you! Until next time...
~Perfect Soldier 01

Quistis & Raijin? Didn't see that one coming. 'Tis an idea... *plot bunny begins to dig into her mind*
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Can't wait until the next chanpter ^^

Wah! *cries uncontrollably* This CAN’T be over! It just CAN’T! >_< This story has been such an emotional journey for me as well, as the characters, and I’m sure that I’ve cried and laughed at times during the course of this wonderful story. This truly has been a beautiful story, and will undoubtedly remain one of my favourites for years to come. You’ve such talent in portraying emotions, writing intriguing and interesting plots, and I can’t even begin to describe how you’ve so accurately showed the characters feelings, capturing each single detail of their mannerisms with such expertise. Each chapter I’ve read has been bettered by its predecessor in content and…well…everything! I can tell you’ve put a lot of loving care and hard work into this and it really shows. I’m really sad to see this end, and I can’t wait to see more Seifuus out of you, and I eagerly await the time when a new Seifuu is published by you, because I don’t think I’ve ever read a Seifuu that has been this powerful. No Seifuu has had this kind of impact on me before and you have my undying praise my friend.
Great job. Truly amazing, and I really mean it.
~ Perfect Soldier 01

Hehe...That last part made me laugh :D Selphie's so funny. I really hope Rajin'll be ok, he's too cool to have anything happen to him. Well done. Thanks for the heads-up on my swimming. I came 3rd! Whoo. I was very pleased as I was racing against my friend who's 20 (she came 1st). Anyway, update soon! :D
~Perfect Soldier 01

Aw... Such a sweet chapter!
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I apologize for not reviewing the other chapter. I was kind of cut off from the Internet since me mum has discovered Morrowind and uses all of the time playing and trying to help me out with my MOD-making ^^ *sheepish grin*
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Anyway, it seems that the end is near. What shall happen to our trio of heroes, hmm? Lol - I shall await the next chapter. Until then! ^_~

Heh...I'm to lazy to sign in ^_^. Very emotional. I could really feel Fujin's emotions there. Oh, and thanks, I'll try to download those songs somewhere. Eepp...I would make this review longer except I've run out of time. I've got to go to a swimming race. -_- whoo...

*sniff* Poor Raijin! I'm glad that Fuu and Seif are together but poor guy. *sniff* At least they all live happily ever after in the end. Right? I'll just keep crying about Raijin now. *sniff* Oh yeah, love the story! :-)

Wow...That was heart-wrenchingly amazing. It was a little strange seeing the sorceress six being so emotional toward someone they did see as their enemy, but it was still very good. Very nice to see them being friendly and supportive. Oh and thanks for the recommendation. I'll try and find some of her music and listen to it sometime ^^

All together now: Aww!! ^_^
Totemo kawaii!! *huggles Fuu-chan & Seifer-chan* Those two are so cute!! ^^;;
...Oh, yeah... poor Raijin-kun... that's so horrible! >.>
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Hehe...I love the way Irvine spoke. Very cowboy ^^. The fluff was really sweet, and I really liked how Rajin was so traumitised. Very well done. I felt his pain and fear, and usually when I read passages like that, it just doesn't seem as real. Very very good job.

Poor Raijin ... he will miss Shiva and Ifrit when he goes free ... right? ^^;;
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You did very well with the psychological aspects of Raijin's torture, and it was really fun to read.
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I shall await the next chapter in glee ^^ Erm... *runs from onlookers*

*in singsong voice* Everything's gonna be all right - Rockabye... More to the song that I don't remember ^_^;;
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Well, truth be told, the chapter was a wee bit mushy, bit it still stood in line with the rest of the plot, so it was entertaining as all of the chapters have been. (Not funny - entertaining. Entrancing - entertaining ^_~) Can't wait for Raijin to come onto the scene again!