 Windswift 3/17/06 . chapter 1Mukuro has new toys indeed...
Amusing and in-character! Haa, and Kurama is cheated by making Shiori sigh over his non-existant relationship.
"she and Hiei seemed to have taken to each other as soulmates or whatever their strange little minds framed the concept as, perhaps due to their comparably traumatic childhoods and similarly anti-social manners."
Did I mention I was quite entertained?
Ve'y nice job!
-Windswift |
 yllom21 2/16/06 . chapter 1The ending was wierd and confusing, but the rest of it was very good! You have a very advance writing style and your vocabulary is surpringly large. Excellent job! |
 daisyink 1/2/05 . chapter 1NO! OMG this is the most depressing fic I've ever read...possibly because Kurama is my second favorite character and possibly because I *hate* Mukuro...don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to criticize your fic, it was really good, but it was...sad. Poor Kurama! *sniff* |
 riversrunthroughme 3/29/04 . chapter 1heh heh...that would suck majorly. I wonder how this will turn out...shivers That would be ...kind disturbing to have eye-balls rollig around...ick... |
 Painted Toenails Always 3/6/04 . chapter 1Aw! That was such a...freaky yet cute story. Kurama and Hiei are the best of friends. Man, your writing is smart, I mean, simply the way you write. The style is excellent. The eye/ear/nose thing was hilarious! |