THIS WAS A VERY GREAT STORY THAT YOU I REALY LOVED TOO READ IT THAN KYOU.

You have got to finish this trilogy. EITHER trilogy. Please. PLEASE. !

I want more! PLEASE! Continue this version of the series also!

LOVE IT! Nuff said. :)

I like this version better, though I think it could be longer than just a trilogy. This has some very interesting possiblities, not the least of which is Dread finding out about said child either before or after it is born. If you've ever seen the TV show 'Beauty and the Beast',Dread could pull the same stunt they pulled on Catherine. Dread could kidnap Rachel untill the child is born, and he's got the Max-probes AND leverage against Max. Couldn't be a sweeter deal if he tried.

Keep up the good work!

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That was beautiful. I can't wait to read the next, in both concepts!

-Maxy Steel