Hey why haven't you updated this story in so long ? I really like it and I think you should finish it...

...please finish this... please?

Aw, what? No! That can't be it... it's so good.

I'm really loving this story-- so deep and detailed, well written and witty too... it's had me hooked since the first sentences.

I'm sad to see it's unfinished, but it has been quite a nice read.

I eagerly await any updates if they may come.

That must be one awkward mom conversation

10/10 Please update

Ha. Very good, and well written. But you say this revolution started on April 31st. Sorry mate. There never has been an April 31st, and never will be.

Hi! Please, continue your fic! Up date, please ^^

Thank you

Sumi chan*

please please please don't be one of htose people that give up on their sories. this is a great story and i relly enjoy reading it.

plz update this story rocks

Please write more!
I love it.
I love Ash and Misty stories.
Write more plz plz plz

Hey! It's been forever and twenty years since you've updated and I'm so glad you have! Naughty Gary! But I feel so bad for him cuz he'll never have a chance with Misty, not while Ash is around. Anywho, ciao and update soon!

Amber Myst

come on i like this storie please write more to it im begging you write more to this storie

T.T

I love this! Please, up date soon!! -Please! T.T-

this is so good it cant stand it XD i'm like druleing over it ( me --> :p~ ) i kinda feel sorry for gary though it's just so sad *cry* anyways it's the best!!

This is a cute and sad story. Please continue. Ash and Misty forever.