O... I like that. Wonderful original idea...

Clever idea.

Great work.

~Cendrillo

WOW! ITS GREAT! THE BABY SAYS HI!

Wow. An interesting take on the Vincent/Lucrecia relationship. She had said in game she was afraid of him. You show wonderfully how and why she might feel that way. Beautiful piece of work!

A well written short tradegy. It's interesting to see prequels set before the game rather than sequels set after.

I love this story.Wounderful!

This was great. It's nice to see a story where Vincent is portrayed as less than perfect and Lucrecia as being strong-willed but not evil. But you might wanna double check your grammar, it was a bit off in some places.

Refreshing tale! I enjoyed it bery much. Nice dialogue, nice little tight plot, nice description.