UPDATE NOW!

great story please continue...

Awesome story! Please write more asap! :)

I just found this story and its predecessor and they're both really amusing. I hope you update this soon and keep up the good work!

This is a really interesting fic. I've been looking for a good Buffy/POTC fic for awhile now!

Okay, Jack isn't ~that~ old, :). He'd make a really, really young father.

I would have loved to see some Spike/Jack interaction, but it's too late into the series. Besides, there might be too much Britishism in the fic for some people.

Well, I hope a new chapter will come up quickly, although it's been a while since it's been updated.

**Gaze**

Eh, odd, but it works, like your other weird crossovers. I'd love to see what happens to Jack! I wanna hear more about his part in all this stuff going on. I want more! Update! PLEASE?

Hey, I'm lovin this! I already read the first part, but I didn't leave a review because I'm way to lazy. You should post again soon and make me happy... Please?

Hee! This one was really good too. Though you know what comes next now don't you? Update! Please, this is sweet I like it. Everyone is really in character and I like this Dawn better than the one in the show.

way to go i love their responce to B, lol still think it should be a jack/dawn because she is like what a gizillion years old...so age shouldnt matter lol i cant wait to read more!

That was a good one from Dawn! Write more soon 'cause I love Captain Jack!

Your attention to detail is mind boggling. I am in love with this story. I need more.
Love Lel xx

Wicked Chapter!!
Please keep Writing!!

Poor Jack. Not used to teenagers!
Niggle: the A levels bit. They're a fairly recent invention, really. My grandparents didn't do them. They certainly didn't exist in Jack's time, when I don't believe they had any formal exams. But I bet he'd have studied geometry in some fashion at some point.

Please update really shortly!

Whoa. Just blow my mind, here. Dawn controling all of this? I love it! Such a unique turn and perspective. You've got me hooked.