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| keldjinfae 2008-10-06 ch 19, | abuseOh my ** god... so hot. I need to shower and change before I go to work. *giggles* Squall and Sora! Adorable and... you know, delicious. However, I am /freaking out/ because your last update was /years/ ago! /Please/ tell me that you're going to be continuing this? You /have/ to respond, even if it's to tell me that you have sadly lost all inspiration. I'll cry and break things, but I'll understand. Just... please, tell me so I don't have to agonize forever? |
| Dayle 2008-08-31 ch 19, anon. | abusehey, just wanted to let you know that I think you're an amazing wirter, and I was just wondering if you'd given up on this story, cause its been over a year right? well anyway, finish it. or i'll hunt you down and smack you with a fish. |
| lostlover1 2008-07-30 ch 12, | abusere-reading this again.. yep its that great Squall is so full of contradictions...geez I'd swear he has a complex (well other than a lolita complex? haha) But it is utterly perfect that you made him this way and i luv it =D |
| Steampunker 2008-07-07 ch 19, anon. | abuseI bow to your awesome writing skills. *bows* This is the only SoraxSquall story that I really like so I hope you continue writing it, pretty please with a cherry on top |
| MyBetwixtScarz 2008-06-27 ch 13, | abuseAww I feel bad for poor Jake. He really loves Riku eh? But he needs his own bofriend or something. Lol maybe he can get with Squall. |
| MyBetwixtScarz 2008-06-27 ch 12, | abuseI am falling in love with this story. It's so well written, funny and inspiring. In the chps that i've read so far I've been on an emotional rollercoaster. From laughing to sobbing. giddy and fanboy-y? Well either way this is one of my favorite chaps so far(it's ranked number 12 can you guess the others?)While reading this chapter I thought about this song I like. It's called 'When I Go Out I Wanna Go Out On A Charriot Of Fire' by Escape The Fate. Pretty long title but it matched almost perfectly with Squall recalling the accident. |
| Parallel Construction 2008-06-18 ch 1, | abuseUPDATE |
| Reader 2008-06-18 ch 18, anon. | abuseI'm completely engrossed in this story. Wow. I hope you haven't given up. Because I'll return to it in another year if it takes that long. |
| Review 2008-06-17 ch 10, anon. | abuseWow. I hope you know that you actually changed my outlook on life with this story. In a very good way. You cleared up a lot of my own personal problems. You're extremely descriptive. I ACTUALLY SAW THE GOLDEN SPELL on the town. You are wonderful. You are amazing. You are the closest thing to an angel a human being could ever be. With much love for this story and for its author. |
| Review 2008-06-17 ch 9, anon. | abuseSora doesn't really love Riku that way, in this story at least. I can tell. It's more out of sympathy that he initiates anything with Riku. Sadly, Squall and Sora seem to have more of a connection. As for Riku, I think Sora was more of an obsession. He loves Sora, true, but he also sees him as a challenge. Sora can calm him down but he can't bring him to life. Maybe Riku needs to keep seeing other people until he can find someone who is in sync with him. This story is ridiculously well written. I find it hard to imagine that you aren't already a published author. If you are, I'll be looking out for your book! But yeah, definitely one of the best quality stories I've read in a while. Hopefully, the story shapes out to be true to the characters; which I believe will end up being a Squall-Sora story. |
| Claudia 2008-06-11 ch 19, anon. | abuseoh my god i love it you have to continue Questions Whats going to happen with Sephie? Will Sora marry Leon? |
| vampyredoll 2008-06-07 ch 3, | abusenice |
| Dybdahl 2008-06-06 ch 8, | abuseSora is a little manipulative, and I'm not sure it's not intentional. |
| Takuya Mikami 2008-06-04 ch 2, | abuseThe story won't be the same (that is stealing) it will just have the same characters and the superhot love triangle plot. I hope u at least read my first chapter. It will be posted Saturday night. I might change my online name. My email is as follows ).I really need support :) All I am asking is to give me a chance. Thank u for your time. |
| Takuya Mikami 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abusePLEASE READ THIS! I know everyone is sad that the story might never get finish, I know I am :( Some people might not like what I am going to do but please hear me out. I AM GOING TO WRITE MY OWN VERSION OF CHANGE MY STRIPES. This story is really special to me and is killing me that is not getting finish. You must think i am full of shi!?@ trying to finish the story and changing it but I really have to this. This is my first fanfic ever! I might not have SephirothStalker's skilI but I have the heart. |