I just lost my sense of up and down. Gravity is off, down is at a strange angle now, literally, physically, I feel that right now. Beautiful beyond measure.

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I loved this story! this is my favorite nny/edgar story ever!

Johnny - I.. LOVE U..(why yees, I think I do)
Scriabin- you're screwed man, SCREWED!
Edgar - *gasp*I luv youu too!!1
Scriabin - u gonna die- HE'S A GONNA KILL U
Johnny - *shove*
Edgar - ahh- *spat*
This relationship is rather screwy... (who'd a thunk it?)

this was my FAVORITE story ever!! Oh man, the ending was AMAZING!! I LOVEDIT! You write amazingly, and all of the stories I've read of yours are SO clever and SO in-character! Really, i would marry you in a heart beat. This story... was amazing. I love you.

Ah, I love the way you portray Johnny and Edgar. No OOC here, for sure. The idea of Nny/Edgar is so farfetched yet so plausible at the same time.. your writing just makes it so much more REAL and alive...

Jeez, I sound like a raving fan. Um, yeah I love your writing, don't stop or I will learn the ways of the hacker and hunt you down... :P

Oh my god... I love that last line. "Johnny, without any hesitation, pushed him off the car and over the cliff." That's twisted. A beautiful and altogether horrifying ending. I laughed.

... D=

If you end Vargas like this, I will KEEL YOO DED. Well, not really. I just so badly want some sort of CONTENTMANT for these two. X3

But, uh. Yeah. Very good. You rock, as per usual.

ah!

he died in the end!

no!

Can you not just let them be happy? For once, can one of them NOT die?

awesome. This story is incredibly in-character, with Nny immortalizing the moment like that and all.

I know you get this alot in reviews, but...YOUR WRITING IS TRULY AMAZING!

You killed Edgar!. . .
(please dont end Vargas like that T__T)
>_>

I found the ending to be quite hilarious... I don't know why. Dark humor I guess...

...you RULE.

ah, another lovely fic from Zarla. It kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time, and was very difficult to keep reading due to all the well-described tension and uncertainty. Scribian (sp?) provided the much needed comic relief, however, and I thank you muchly for that.
One thing though, is that the end seemed too abrupt. Since most of the story consists of long paragraphs of diolouge, with only a few minor short comments from Edgar's thoughts and such, it seems strange to have the last several pargraphs of the fic one-liners.
But still, I love it so much! *addicted to Edgar/Nny Zarla fics*

I just, I . . .
I am speechless! By the Tallest! You are THE MOST AMAZING fanfic writer I have EVER KNOWN TO BE EXISTING. I am serious. But, man . . . the depressing part of this is that it makes me think . . . that "Vargas" will not have a happy ending.
. . . Dude, I really think that you've pulled me into the whole Nny/Edgar thing. But I'd never write a fic like this; I think that you're the only one who could pull it off. Seriously. But YAY! Long live strange pairings! I like 'em, yes I do.
. . . Oh yeah. I thought I said I was speechless.
. . . Oh, well!
*shrugs*
*hugs Nny and Edgar*
*is decapitated by Nny*
*~Headless Bagatelle (she wants more "Vargas", even though she can't see!)