I loved it! It was sweet!

This was a nice story, but will you continue it? I realize it was only for a challenge, but I'm curious if you'll have that dinner conversation, and finish the case. It's set up nicely for another chapter or a sequel.

That was really good. Thanks for sharing.

Aww, that was so sweet and romantic. I would never have thought what a romantic place a graveyard could be :-).

Hi Mandy, Nice fix.I bet Grissom would forget himself - even at a crime scene - if Sara were the cause.

Sweet! I love your choice of venue. Definitely not a traditional romantic locale . And poor Greg...LOL

Valentine's Day in a graveyard? Only you could make it a romantic setting! :-) I love how you build the emotional semi-angst, the shared moment over the dead child, the near kiss, and *sigh* the dinner invitation. Wonderful!

What a brilliant submission for this challenge. Descriptive enough to get you wondering, but vague enough to leave the rest to the imagination. Great job!

A different side of Grissom...interesting. I like the way you drenched Greg too. Fun read. Good job!

I like this. A different type setting for G/S to renew their friendship. So glad he asked her to dinner. Greg falling in the open grave-priceless.

Yeah! Glad to see you took up the challenge. Nice job getting all the elements together. Laughed at Greg in the grave. ;-)