 Herald of Chaos 2007-04-30 . chapter 20That was AWESOME! |
 samedifferences 2005-08-11 . chapter 20HEH! i lub the yu gi oh bishies and the phillip pullman northen lights series thingy! great great work, winkwink |
 Tramontana Keeper 2005-03-13 . chapter 20Man...it's been ages since i've gotten around to checking up on fanfictions...I hate school. Cool that there's going to be a sequel. One thing bothered me though- the whole thing with Ryou's powers is getting too MCC-ish. In case you're wondering, MCC is Main Character Complex. It happens when a char (usually the main, but can be others) for no reason at all gets horribly super-powered and practically undefeatable, and (personally) I felt that you were making Ryou too powerful, out of the blue. So watch out for that. Anyway, great story! |
 x0wlx 2004-12-04 . chapter 20Wow, i can't believe its finally over... *sniff* its sad... tho yay for awsome ending, and a bigger yay for much awaited sequal! ^-^ Can't wait (yes, and u kno me..) hehe, but i'v got "almost" enough to read in the mean time... tho not rite now... curses to parents new curfue on computer -_- what, it's only 11pm *rolls eyes* meh, i'll catch up on Anger Management n that tomorrow or sumfin, chow for now!
*in doll form, being suffocated by Bakura*
#1 Fan here! *dies* XP |
 Yoake no Yami 2004-12-02 . chapter 7Dun dun dun!
Well, this was a good chapter. I guess there's nothing I can say since you've already finished the story. Ovell. I'll read some more later. Right now I'm tired. Bye! |
 Yoake no Yami 2004-11-19 . chapter 6It's nice to understand what they are looking for now. ^^ It seems that it will be easier for them to find the Dust now. Too bad anzu, the friendship ranting freak, isn't there. She'd have them finding friendship, and consequently Dust, in no time.
well, it's only 9 pm but i'm really worn out from this week of school and i have a headache so i'll have to read the rest of your wonderful story later. I also have to update my owns story. -sigh- it can be so annoying sometimes. i'm sure u understand. if you like just regular stories, not fanfics, then maybe you could go to i have an account on there and it would be great if you would review me. ^^ my pen name is zoiqu-msyjji, but don't feel obligated to read. it's just in case you get utterly bored. ^^ bye |
 Yoake no Yami 2004-11-19 . chapter 5mean trick, malik. mean trick... but it worked. ^_^ I'm glad Bakura's back. ^^ I'm glad they're all back. Well, i'll just go ahead and read the next chapter. bye! |
 Yoake no Yami 2004-11-19 . chapter 4Good. ryou is waking up! yayness!
poor malik. his yami is just plain evil. stupid, manipulating baka...
yeah, well i'm sure we all feel that way. Yami malik just needs to get a life... But i guess that would be bad... now i'm just rambling.
This is a really enjoyable story. The yuugi/yami pairing seems pretty natural. i mean they even hold hands in the anime here in america. I object to yaoi a lot sometimes, but everyone has their day. I'm rambling again, srry. i guess it would be best if i just moved on to the next chapter so i could write another review. ^^; |
 Yoake no Yami 2004-11-19 . chapter 3Don't worry, the last line didn't make Malik sound gay. Ya' know in the anime that is shown here in america, tristan carries mokuba through pegasus's palace and he's not gay in that show...to my knowledge. 4Kids Entertainment would have editted anything partaining to that out, i think. Well, that was an interesting fight. Poor bakura... bye! |
 Yoake no Yami 2004-11-19 . chapter 2Hi! this story makes me want to read Northern Lights. Thanks for taking the time to explain Daemons. ^^ the only daemons i'm familiar with are ones from Warhammer 40K, though I would guess you haven't heard of it. I have a little brother so i have, but alas. I digress.
This is a really neat story and I can't wait to see wut happens next. ^^ bye for now and thnx for the review! |
 Yoake no Yami 2004-11-19 . chapter 1Neato! I like this story already. I like the way you've chosen to depict each of the characters. ^^ There are so many ways to portray each of them, I'm sure it's difficult to choose. This set up is probably my favorite.
Evil, sadistic yami bakura
evil malik
pissed yami yuugi
innocent, accepting ryou
gullible yuugi
and lots of hate between the tomb robber and the pharaoh. just as it should be.
Wow you got a lot of reviews on this story. ^^ bye! |
 silverdreams 2004-11-19 . chapter 20 you're not off the hook yet! u still have to write the sequel!
-oh, it's pretty good by the way |
 HANDHELD Uber Rei Model 05 2004-11-19 . chapter 20THAT WAS WONDERFUL! I'm sad, now,t hough...It's over...IT'S REALLY OVER! I WEEP TEARS OF SADNESS! But I DO hope you do another corssover...never say never...you'll go CRAWLING back to crossovers once those plot bunnies begin gnawing at your brain. Once again, This was a fantastic and well-written story. KEEP IT UP! |
 darktenshi17 2004-11-19 . chapter 20*huggles8 This was such a great fic and I loved the WAFF feeling at the end!! *squeel* was so.. I don't want to say it but, sweet! It was cute!
I loved the story! It was so good and every chapter just had me waiting and trying to guess what would happen the next time!! The suspence was gret!! I so much loved this story (sorry for bad grammar) Loved it! |
 x0wlx 2004-11-18 . chapter 19Ahh! no *slow motion no too =P* it's over *cries* i didn't think that chapter was bad at all, very long yes, but i didn't really notice any "patches" =P Well, as long as the epilogue is good ^-^ lol, sorry it took so long for me to get to this (still grounded from computer, yay for parents being out =P) i'll be waiting for more excuses to sneek onto the computer ;)
Haha, and as always
Your #1 Fan! ^-^ |