| Reviews for Footprints in the Snow |
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Guest 4/10/13 . chapter 1 In a disturbed way, I really liked this. Can you put more on or make more like these? |
tsukuyomi.sakurachi 12/18/11 . chapter 1I liked it! However, I was really curious on how the people in Cephiro would take the news though. And that was so bad that you didn't give us a vague truth of the culprit. |
Kamiragem 6/3/11 . chapter 1This is great! I love this fanfic. I'm a Hikaru lover, but liked the fic so much! |
inugurlume 5/23/07 . chapter 1I really liked this one shot. I don't think it's morbid or disturbing to let out your emotions in this fashion. I do it too sometimes. It's a great way to get everything out. keep up the good writting! _ |
Wolfy 4/7/07 . chapter 1 Both legs were going? I'd say someone crucified her, but I could be thinking that because its alost Easter. I think someone would have noticed if that's what had happened to poor Hikaru anyway. Ah, well. Kinda' reminded me of Law and Order. Just a little creepy though. I wish Umi or Fuu could have caught up to her. Remember to smile cuz' Jesus loves ya! Happy Easter! He is Risen! |
Lenidrabbles 3/26/07 . chapter 1Wow. Been some time since I was spooked this thoroughfully. Wow. Kudos for you! :D |
Kita1 6/7/06 . chapter 1M... a nice chiller. Very well done! One glaring problem: dialogue should either be all English or all Japanese. Don't try and mix it; that will confuse the heck out of your readers, and it drags their attention away from the story. Don't try and impress us with your knowledge of Japanese-try and impress us with the story itself. (Which, by the way, you did.) |
freeMAGIC 4/13/06 . chapter 1It was nice, but it scared me. Crimson footprints, crimson blood, CrimsonMint! No! But I liked it. It just scared be. And keep your good mood, I prefer your humor stories. Bloody ones aren't my type. |
PiKACHUFAN4288 2/27/06 . chapter 1i hope you dont get in anymore bad moods when you write fanfics. or actually i hope you get rid of them all together (they're not healthy anyways) too gruesome for my taste (i'm too timid \ ), even if it is all implication... but good fanfic nonetheless. and the fact you didnt really pin the crime... it's okay. i'm not really interested in knowing the unpleasant facts. x_xU |
swordanddagger 9/17/05 . chapter 1Wow. That was horrifying. And sad. But it was well written. |
Lucinda the Maid 5/15/05 . chapter 1Uwaah! I loved it! Despite the fact that you killed off my favorite character from this anime ((sobs)), it was excellent; very well written. I liked how the footprints tied everything together, and how you kept repeating the use of the color red. Nice job! I really don't have much constructive criticism, so I'll just end on a good note by restating how much I loved this fic. It's going right onto my favorite's list. |
Painestwin 3/27/05 . chapter 1O_O whoa! awsem! I mean killing her off wasn't but I mean...the story was really good _ |
Duzzie 12/5/04 . chapter 1O, this one was very sad, i almost cried, but it was also very good, poor Hikaru, I really did like it though. |
Shika.Tot 7/20/04 . chapter 1Thats a really good story. Its the first Rayearth story ever, and it was good_ |
karayuquex 5/30/04 . chapter 1Crepy! I certainly muz say dat it was Creppy... but I love it, though what happened to Hikaru was certainly tragic... So who's the stalker? Or... was it just some emptiness or envious god that killed her off? Well, my imagination wasn't so broad but that's just what came to my mind when I read the first part when the stalker or whoever first appeared... Well, you had a sequel and I'm gonna read it now! Love it! |