This seems like a good prelude to an angsty fic that would end up 1x2; I want to know how Hilde got Duo to love her & what Heero would do after he heard Duo's declaration at the end of the wedding. It makes for a good one shot, but it could definely be expanded into something else. Great for a 'newbie fic'. :D

That seems to leave for another chapter, ne? Right now I'm too tired to care. The only thing I care about right now is... IT WAS A SAD FIC!! Duo just slipped through Heero's fingers. I'm surprised that Heero let Duo go without a fight!

@_@ yah... how nice... XDXDXD i really like it!

Hey, BI!! 'Tis the Almighty Regina_sama from LJ who hath been seeking you here on this archive. ^^ I *knew* I've seen this story before, so I had to do some digging ::coughcoughstalkingcough:: in order to find you here. Yay! Here you are! Glad to find you... ^^

Great ficlet, by the way! (though I've said that already--think of it as a double pick-me-upper ^_^). Luv ya, and toodles!

~*Regina*~

Wai ;.; You're so cruel to poor poor Duo *sniffles* Haha, not that I was any less sparing of Duo in my fic o-o

Aw *stabs Hilde* You rot in hell, you >D That should'be been Heero's baby, nyehehehe *hides*

Anyway, its cute ^_^

hmm... i like it... its intriguing... i would say you might want to run it through spell check a little more thoroughly or get a beta (i do beta fics by the way. email me if ya need one.) but it has a very good idea... albeit the general idea is used quite often the wedding thing is not... i'm hoping that you will continue this because i would really like to see how it turns out. whats the baby look like for one. and does duo leave hilde? please continue and contact me if your in need of a beta. my sugestion for a title... Black Wedding Bells. well anyways im impressed especially since your new at this. I am too my stuff isn't perfect either. you have a few things to work out ut all in all it's got a good idea. please continue.

Aw... you're breaking my heart really that was good, I'm so sorry I know nothing about GW or the characters but it was so nice of you to review my story that I thought I would review yours. Please write more your writing is very good at invoking emotion and that is quite a skill I still liked it even though I know nothing about GW. 0kay so I saw oneepisode once but I don't think that really qualifies me to give advice on the characters.
Keep up the good work and I promise not to leave my story hanging for you ;) Glasses 0-0

i _know_ i've read this fic before... weird that i didn't review it then... :S ah well... good story ^^ kinda sad though... *sobs*
oh 1 thing: i think it should be 2xH instead of Hx2... the dominant partner (in heterosexual relationships always the male partner) goes in front of the x
mara202

Finally at Duo's wedding Heero realizes the truth and morns for a past that never was, and a future that can never be...
How is that for a summery? well it was good but I think Duo should be with Heero! Ne ways I will be looking out for you Write again soon! and if it isn't too much trouble would you read and Review one of my stories? Reviewers seem to be alittle scarce for me... Well thanx for your time...
Duo/Jon