I liked it. Very sweet.

Very good story! Your descriptions were good . . . the characters were in character . . .
I really liked it!
I look forward to reading more of your work! 8~D

Good plot, it's not too shabby!:P Your a great writer!

wow this is good please update

This was good. You deserve a big soft pretzel^__^

I don't think it moved too fast, and it was wonderfully written, but your ending could use some work. The last paragraph seemed a bit out of place. I understand why you wrote it; Pansy's reaction is necessary, but you might try to work it in some other way. "Spend the rest of the night together" would be a great place to stop. Maybe you could work Pansy in before that?

Cute, a nice fluf reading. As for constructive critism, the only part I noticed was that you said "respectively" twice when referring to Harry and Ron's dates, which... eh, I didn't think the repetition was necessary. Just my opinion though. Great job, it's nice fluff for Valentine's day!

i love it

Well first to answer you question, it does seem to be moving a bit fast, everything that you wrote about could have taken up a good 3 chapters without breaking a sweat ;) You seem like a 'get to the point' type of the writer, but try stretching out scenes and describing emotions, it will give the reader more time to digest what's going on, :) Now for the story... I LOVE IT SO MUCH! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!! I LOVE IT! I've always read like a billion Hr/Dr stories, but I've never seen thi plot before. Very very well done! :) Please update soon!
~A~

I'm not a fan of some of the coupling, but very, very sweet story ;)