Wow, what raw emotion & GS abgst!!

plz continue

WOW. Again, WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW. That was... amazing. Depressing. Heartbreaking. Makes me wish there was ONE guy on this earth like Grissom. Etc, etc.

~IGC t DM

Again, so, so good
Jess x :-D

oh wow, i love this fanfic, it is so good, a bit anticlimatic at the end but stil entertaining

Damn, that was kinda anti-climactic, but very Grissom.

AHH, I don't know wether to cry or sigh. It was wonderful.

"She let him stew in his own juice for a moment, strangely enjoying seeing him out of that emotional straightjacket he’d forced on himself"

That's so true. He has put himself in an emotional straight jacket.

Chapter One Review:

"If Sara had been tempted to delude herself into thinking he was not, the other women at the party would’ve made sure to write her a reality check and slap her in the face with it, multiple times."

I loved that line. It made me laugh. This fic is ASTOUNDING! So true to character. Have I mentioned you are my favorite writer. I love ALL your stories!

"not ready to cope with more rejection and chastising herself for yielding once again to the bizarre grasp Grissom still had on her. "
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That's so true.
Anyway, another great story. I'm liking the G/S interaction and I'm very curious about what is going to happen in the next chapter.
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Wow! Very much wow. Angst with little bits of humor mixed in. I love this story! Great job.

Wonderful story, but it can't end like that! Please, write a sequel!

Wow this is brillaint. I loved both chapters and you portrayed Sara and Grissom so well.

THE END? THE END? Whaddya mean THE END?? C'mon...the best way to work through that tormenting angst is to write a happy ending! This was really well written, and I'd love to see it continued. If not, I'm sure we'll all accept another fic. I like your style. (God, that sounds cheesy, but you know what I mean)

OMG! This just screams sequel! Wow, So Very Powerful! That was just incredible - very intense. Poor, poor Grissom - the man is so emotionally dysfunctional! I felt so frustrated for Sara - how she can retain one shred of hope in him is just amazing! An excellent read, but you've let me wanting more!

What? How can you leave me like that!?!?!? What was Grissom going to say? Who walked in on them? I need more information! Update soon please!
By the way, you are an excellent writer. I could picture everything perfectly; your characters are incredibly in character. Don't let anyone tell you differently. Keep up the excellent writing.