Oh Come on...Don't tell me you are A/C...

this would never happen.

what is your problem. after angel said he was in love with someone else buffy should have punched him. God, what is wrong with you. I hate the angel/cordelia thing and buffy shouldn't be so understanding!

Very good very good! Bravo! lol neway um can u pl, plz write another chapter, wherelike um Buffy comes to LA not listening to Angel, and yea...cuz it would be cool n stuff. lol i screwed that up oh well.

Hi. GREAT STORY!

Ok, buffy wud never be cool about cordy and angel, and angel acted totally out of character other than that gud

Hey!
I never read Buffy one parters, but since it's yours...well you see where that leaves me. :-) Anyway, I liked it, although it did remind me a little of the one parter we wrote. Angel was definitely in character. Buffy on the other hand wasn't, not in the last half of the chapter, although you did give a reason for that. Besides characters don't always have to be in character. The dialogue was excellent, better than the large paragraphs and there are some problems with your punctuation. But other than that this was a pretty good story. Very dramatic.
Bye, smile1 :-)