I really shouldn't have read this while eating dinner- I almost spit out my food a few times. XD

My favorite line of all time --> "Not to mention, he was… cute? No, he was much more than cute. I don’t think there was a word in any dictionary that I could’ve used to accurately describe him."

HAH! That was gold. I loved Tifa and her inner thoughts panicking and feeling shy. I smiled reading the whole thing. More VinTi all the way!

that is so cute!

I'm a punk. I've had this on my list of gifts for a while now, and I can't believe I never reviewed it. I'm the worst gift-receiver EVER.

I really do thank you, even though it's...er...three years late. *oh, how I want to crawl under a rock now* You know how much I love your description, the tone you give the characters. You zero in on a single moment in time and highlight human vulnerability and awkwardness and tenderness. Very exposing, and I'm so very, very honored that you chose me.

The POV switches, the inner musings. Observations of another's discomfort, and still so concerned about how they appear themselves that the moment takes a backseat to their hurried brains. Nice overtones, nice undertones. Nice placement all together of everything in here.

Harhar. I'd love to bump into a solid, warm and breathing Vincent's chest.

I know you've been really busy lately with school, but I hope to catch you around sometime soon. We've much to catch up on.

Take care!

Do you really need more praise for this witty and brilliant piece of fiction?

No. Am I going to give it to you anyway? Yes. :D

First-class writing, and contrary to popular opinion, the jumpy perspective worked for me. I think it fits with the general mood of the one-shot. *applause* Lovely.

A little jumpy - I think you shifted point of view a little too quickly for coherency. Try putting more than one or two sentances per character before switching back and forth. That being said, I thought this was fun and cute, and heck, if you so chose, not a bad beginning to a multi-chapter. Bottom line: good, but needs a little more organization.

I'm really enjoying this! You know how to keep both Vincent and Tifa in character! I need more!!

I like to think of myself as dignified. Really, I am dignified.

But this made me want to squeal like a fangirl.

*winces* Oh, curses.

Wow. I'm loving all your FF7 stuff so far, but this one cracked me up. Also liked the very sad 'Go Wolves!' bit. Keep it up, this is golden!
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PS: Thx for the 'Climbing, Falling, Standing Still' review...

This is too cute. I love the part where Tifa stumbles over her own words.

“Ohh… Oh wow, I’m glad. I mean that’s nice. I mean, I’m glad, and that is nice.

Again, EXTREME CUTENESS! I love all your fics! {Throws cookies to Jess Angel}

Ahh, I wish it wasn't a one shot!! Love what you have going here. Makes me wish there was more! But at any rate, very well written, very cute. Love the diction throughout, especially the dialogue. Reminds me of some sweet, awkward conversations with my boyfriend, in the beginning ^_^x

I read this awhile ago but I guess I never got the chance to leave you a review. I must have forgotten. lol, anyways, this was so sweet! A perfect short AU Tifa and Vincent fic! Everything flowed and the ending was beautiful. As always, you manage to capture the character's personalities perfectly. Good job!

Aww! That was sweet! Sorry, I didn't review earlier! Great job as usual. Love the Vincent/Tifa ficcies! ^_^ Now words from the X-File Agents.
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Mulder:
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Scully: What are we doing here?
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Mulder: Do you have... Carnal lusts?
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Blond: Hmph!
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Mulder: Ow!
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Scully: Is this how you pick up girls? I am so unattracted to you right now...
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Mulder: Wait! No! Come back! Wait a minute, Scully was attracted to me? My love, come back!
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Heheheh... I love writing Spoofs!

god tifa's lucky i wana go with vincent to lunch *pouts* oh well i love your story (and all of your others) keep writing!
~*~elbereth silimaur

Hee hee. Sweet.
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I *really* wouldn't have minded bumping (or falling)into Vincent on my university campus...