Aw I love the Luke angst. Me thinks you need to drink some more wine and give us some more random musings, because they seem to work for you! ;)

"She keeps her eyes open and I always close mine."

wow...how depressing that would have been for nicole...well...even if she didn't know. great story!!

2 words. Majorly Awesome.

you did a great job. :)

Aw...I love it..you are so good at writing them!

WOW!

that was AMAZING!
I don't mean like, during the ciggarette amazing, I mean, so-dead-on-it's-like-you-ARE-LUKE-AMAZING!!

Let's face it he married "THE LAWYER", beacuse the poor man is human, he gave up hope.
I have to agree with DAMNMYDOOAH, I never liked Nicole(because she was not lorelai) but i respect her purpose, (to make Lorelai jealous!! I just saw "the Clamor and the clangor" again! Good scene, let's break the bells-why did you pretend to move-why do you care that i moved-because i care-why-... stupid preist butting in and ruining EVERYTHING!

sigh, i can't wait for the season to start again...

sorry i have ADD, GREAT STORY, i'm gonna check out your other published works,

I'm so glad you didn't delete this the day after you posted it, or else I would have never gotten to read this. I thought it was fantastic, a really good look into Luke's head. I really liked it, it's such a good one-shot.

Fleh! That was nasty! Really good though. You write Luke-the-** very well. Not that I think he's a real **, but if he were or were acting like one, this would be it. I don't like Nicole (solely for the reason that she's not Lorelai), but she really doesn't deserve this.
Please drink more wine in the future. It does your stories good. ;)

wow...that seems to be the first reaction everyone's having. Very striking. I think you are right on with Luke's situation, but I wonder if he's that honest with himself? If so he must be really beating himself up. Thanks for the insight

Wow!! That is a very different kind of GG story. It wasn't bad just different :) But I still liked it!

Wow...this was amazing...I really loved it...

Wow. That is harsh! And yet, great. This is a great take on the Luke/Nicole situation. "I'm the **." Fabulous.

Wow...I'm so glad I clicked on your fic =) Even with it's short length..it's probably one of the best things I've read on this place. You've got Luke down perfectly...Or so I figure. Depressing, but still left a smirk on my face. I could cry..but yet if I opend my mouth, I'm sure a laugh would fall out...Ahh, wonderful =) Thanks alot for posting this! And sorry for not reading it earlier!

** off, I wonder who the ** is that she must be thinking about right now. But then she murmurs my name and I know that I’m the **. She keeps her eyes open and I always close mine.
definatly good stuff.

Wow, this is a really intimate look at Luke's inner struggle - I can't believe how you captured so much in such a short piece! This is amazing, thanks so much for posting it. More, please!!

aww! I like it. :D Please continue!