Very cute! I loved Sora's entrance, fits him i think. Just one little flaw- whats up with the words down the side. it makes it hard to read. But anyways, great job!

RIKU!
now that that's over... I know that song! i really kinda describes their relationship! Is that mysterious guy Sora? YAY! I WAS RIGHT! YAY FOR SORAxKAIRI! even though i like KairixRiku, too, this one seems a little more fitting. :D

Aw. I LOVE it. I seriously do! Now ... WHERE did Sora go? Can you write more?! PLEZ!

ohs..how sweet..><
thats so romantic and mysterious of how sora appeared like that..please make a sequel or something..lols

i love the romance you put!! it was soo good! i loved it! i was crying when sora came...yes i'm a emotional person! well this as a perfect one-shot i'm just sad i bearly read it now!

Wow! Another fantabulous story by my favorite author Kintora! I especially loved the input of Simple and Clean bc that is my favorite song sung by my favorite character of all time, written by my favorite author on this site! Love it,SO awesome and So me! Fabulous. I am a devoted reader of yours and have read every KH story you've made. I can't wait for the next chppies of When Love Blooms at Opposite Ends, and Too Far Over the Edge. Keep up the good work! You will forever remain my favorite! Luv ya Mariah!

- Kairi :D

aw, that story was so cute, it brought tears to my eyes! loved the one-shot! :)

how sweet! update!

AW THAT WAS SOO CUTE AND DONT WORRY YOU MADE IT SEEM REALLY ROMANTIC! PLEASE UPDATE YOUR OTHER STORIES ESPECIALLY THE ONE WHERE SORA IS AN ASSASSIN! YOU ARE REALLY GREAT! PATS FOR YOU!

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make more please! ~*~

Omg that was beautiful..I had tears coming out of my eyes when I read the last line..it was so romantic..oh please please keep up the good work!

omg so cute...it waz awesome...ur totally great

*is suffercating from the fluffnes* *gasps for air and stands up* WHEW! I almost died when you exposed the stranger in the mask as... SORA! YOU ALMOST KILLED ME! Anyways, as you will see in my other review, HERES YER COOKIE! *gives cookie*
DG(aka, sister.. odd, yes): AW MAN! YOU SHOULD'VE KILLED HER! Now I gotta go find a new torture deviece! *walks off grumply swinging an axe around her fingers*
O.o Right.. *puts note to watch her back in later days*

that was such a good one-shot fic! although the romatic level wasn't all that bad, and for your first go at romance you did a good job ^^ though my suspicions is that Riku PURPOSELY told Kairi that Sora didn't come back. ah well, the surprise was SO much better than just saying "Oh yeah, as you can see Sora's not with me at the moment but he DID come back" BAH! ^^

oh how cute >_