is there going to be more?

please write more

this was cool i love SG1 and Harry Potter Xover stories i do hope that some one will continue this story as it seems like it will b e good. if it is under a different penname can you let me know so i can c arry on reading it there

thank you

ellie angel

*bwahhahahaha* jack's quips are so awesome! AND DANIEL DOES LOOK LIKE DUMBLES! *unfortunatly i'm not fond of dumblybore* PLEASE UPDATE CUZ I LOVE IT!

Oh, interesting cliffhanger. I can't wait to see where you go with this from here. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and update with more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran

Please continue this story.

oh, facinating! love the idea!

Well, for the most part I am enjoying your story. However, there are some elements that could be improved. First off, the story is progressing a bit too quickly. It also seems a bit too shallow. It needs to be more detailed and fleshed out. The characters don't really seem to be acting like themsleves, especially Jack. You made him sound way to immature. One last thing, how old was Daniel when his parents were taken? Does he remember them? In anycase, keep writing!

This is very cute, I quite like the reactions in the last chapter, but I must say that the story seems to be flying by way too fast. Another thing i must say is that if you're going to post it under two different pen names, you might want to mention it in an authors notes or something. Otherwise people are going to cite you for plagerism.

Very good so far, can't wait to read more. As for Daniel as a toddler - that was so sweet.