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| maya2 2007-06-17 ch 14,  | abuseI loved it so much I had to finish before I reviewed. Nice job! I'm so glad that Piper and Leo are together and they know about both of their sons in the end. Great solution for Leo's deal. Now why didn't the TPTB think about that? LOL. Anyway, nice touch with Prue being able to attend. Always thought it was silly that she couldn't come back when everyone else did but I guess it was up to Shannon. Brava and thanks for sharing! |
| LeoPiper4ever 2006-01-08 ch 14, | abuseLoved the whole story! It was GREAT! |
| letsmakesomemagic 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseWhat the hell dude?? Why is she speakin Japanese, Hong Kong is in China!! Most ppl there speak mandarin! MaD mAtT! |
| Ur PaL mAtT 2005-02-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseHeY...aGaIn! BO! Dude, U SUCK! Mahahaha! Find a day job! LMAO |
| CrazyGabs 2004-08-24 ch 14, | abusei think i reviewed your story before u hd finished it and anyway finaly ive read the ending and it was beautiful, you should write piper and leo ones longer like this one all of your others are only 2 oe 3 chapters long. i lvoe the way you write well done Gabrielle |
| SunshineDaisies816 2004-08-05 ch 14, | abusei really liked the story you should do a sequel!! i would like that a lot! |
| Gryffindor620 2004-08-05 ch 14, | abuseYES!!FINALLY!! Great Chapter!! Update Soon Son!! |
| OrbingPunk 2004-08-05 ch 14, | abuseSo sweet. I loved this entire story. Good job ;) |
| charmedrox 2004-07-30 ch 13, | abuseit roks hope u updt sun gr8 fanfiction |
| EternalConfusion 2004-07-23 ch 13, | abuseGreat chapter! That certainly shook things up a bit!! lol...didn't expect Dan turning up! Can't wait for next chapter with P/LEO fluff! lol |
| lilqt4lyf620 2004-07-22 ch 13, anon. | abuseplease write more soon. i would love it if piper told dan that she was already married to leoand had two sons with him. oh and dont forget to tell him bout her being a witch! please and thank you |
| mylicon 2004-07-21 ch 13, | abuseLoved ti plz update |
| psychokitty3 2004-07-21 ch 13, | abuseBad Dan! How dare he?!? but, she'll choose Leo, again. I want you to continue! I like this story, so please finish it! Please please please please please please pretty pleasey please please finish it! |
| sailorwind 2004-07-21 ch 2, | abuseThe poem was good. I liked Paige calling for Richard with her TKO. Constructive criticism: Your writing is very "stream of consciousness." You might want to try and break up your thoughts a bit more. |
| sailorwind 2004-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI liked your first chapter! |