that is so horribly sad

this is so well writen and just love how you play with her emotions and it is just so good too bring up that everyone just leave her and I would love for a more detailed version of this but it's your choiche

isn't that so true! i usually don't read shorter stories but this was really good!

That... was incredibly sad. Kinda disturbing.

woah. Woah. Double woah with an extra wow on the side. Completely amazing. I love the way you wrote it, it's poetic even. Woah. Completely amazing. With a two plates of woah and a wow on the side.
becks.
P.s Woah.

Oh gosh, this was excellent, I want more... I loved the way it was written, almost poetic. And I like the pairing. More stuff soon?

ah!
How sweet. Not necessarily true to anything, but all the same I loved it.
I really did.
It was so beautiful

aww thats so sweet.
ouch.
but sweet.
cute lil' fanfic, well done!

Yipes. Ouch...just ouch. Beautiful, but...ouch!
DKG.