 dog youkai jane 2006-06-13 . chapter 1very, VERY confusing... |
 jubo-tron 2005-10-24 . chapter 1 SO CONFUSING...U SUCK!! |
 gossa 2005-02-26 . chapter 1m,good one shot,i have liked it a lot :D |
 Lunar InuYasha 2004-10-10 . chapter 1KOOL! confusing...but awsome...i dint get the ending thing but that is beside the point...very clever story...you should add another chapter to it...it would be interesting ^^ lol nice work... loved it... (big surprise ^^)
Lunar ~.^ |
 Master Wild Mage 2004-07-11 . chapter 1I'm guessing this si going to be a one shot but I really hope you continue the story. It sorta leaves you hanging. I read hero of the 21st century just to understand this better. I'm glad I did though. The story line itself was great. Please keep it going I want to see what happens in this story line as well as the other one. |
 Matagot 2004-06-29 . chapter 1I love you even more now, y'know =3 Why? Because you wrote a fic for one of the Hero challenges *nods* That's why. You're still my number one favourite fanfic author *nods again* |
 iNiGmA 2004-05-11 . chapter 1ooh that was a reel cool fic!! i'm gonna check out thatt link.. it seems like a cool stori =]
~iNiGmA |
 kitty4 2004-03-11 . chapter 1Hi Mido-chan! How are you! You nearly had me with this one, if you'd came up with this only about half a year earlier I wouldn't have had a clue what this Hojo=Inu thing all was about. I at first found a story answering to the 21Hero-challenge without knowing anything about it and I didn't understand a thing (kind of like some of your reviewers it seems who stop reading as soon as the word 'End' appears somewhere in the text...no use with your well meant points 1 to 17. -_-* Does actually anybody read AN?
Anyway, I pretty fast found the homepage and the doujinshi and geez, I wish some of the people having started a fiction there about it would actually finish their work eventually. Who knows, maybe you start a new boom or bring Hero21 to ffnet, I don't think it was ever that famous here, was it.
The way you tell the story is quite good - the wound on the cheek is a good idea to enter and you make it plausible (more so than some other authors) why Inuyasha suddenly wakes up as Inuyasha again. Though I think everything went a bit fast, but that's maybe because the doujinshi is so long in comparrison and also I guess you didn't want to make such a long story out of it. Not that I complain about chapter length - certainly not! ^.^; you couldn't beat my Nr.1 H21challenge favourite though (heck if I know the name or author at the moment!) but you certainly have a good second place!^^
-~ kit |
 Yabou 2004-02-24 . chapter 1Hiya, again, Mi-chan! Lol, I forgot that I read this one the other day and so I just read it again. No harm done though, ne? Anyway, great job, keep up the awesome work with your other fics too!
I finished reading Hero of the 21st Century, too. I must agree that the art gets much better as it progresses.
~ Yabou ~ SL |
 E. Marie 2004-02-24 . chapter 1Thank you! Wow, I'm really at a loss to say much else. You're one of my favorite fanfic authors, for one, but after reading this one shot, I went straight to hibernatingbats.com, where I spent the better part of the afternoon reading "Hero in the 21st Century". The "thank you" is, of course, for writing another wonderful story AND for introducing me to such a fantastic work as Hero! Really, awesome...I mean, I'm staring down the barrel of all the lit. homework I've put off for the last several hours, but I just can't help but smile b/c of the double treat I've had today. Thank you! |
 t wrecks 2004-02-17 . chapter 1Thank you for the Hero In 21st century info..this is very good. I have read some of fan fics at that site and was wondering if you post on that site, what is your name, I have theories...anyway thanks for this nice valentines present to your fans. I had never heard of that site. Looking forward also to another chapter of 2004! |
 Girl Anachronism07 2004-02-15 . chapter 1This was a good ending to the challenge, I've read a few others to this challenge (on Hero in the 21st, love that site) but this one has to be the most well thought out. Cool job! |
 Saiyou-the-lover 2004-02-15 . chapter 1 Ugh...I didn't understand any of that, would it be possible for you to explain some of it to me in an email? it's listed above. None of that is from the actual show is it? Did you make all those details up or is it in the later episodes? I haven't seen that many...T_T! |
 ish 2004-02-15 . chapter 1 look, I'm sure this is a great fic and everything, but let me tell you that i was confused from the get-go, and when i finished, I was still confused! What the heck is going on? |
 AleGnA 2004-02-15 . chapter 1Wow, that was really interesting. A little confusing, but I liked it! Umm... what exactly is a Doujinshi? I've seen that word before... This site sounds interesting. I'll have to check it out. Keep up the good work! |