 OrangeAce 2008-01-11 . chapter 20Wow wow! My first time to read a tea/joey story and seems pretty interesting~ No! More than interesting! Haha. Well, well... anyways! Please, Please update soon! |
 Rewind Soldier 2006-11-26 . chapter 20holy whee and 1/2. this was simply too great... one HUGE problem though... you stopped writing... COME BACK! I BEG YOU! yea youre an awesome writer, keep going! woo! |
 ashley 2006-10-03 . chapter 20 oh dont stop this is really good it was like a book i couldnt put it down and u should write more |
 Lily10 2006-07-30 . chapter 20Although the plot is not a very original idea and there's a few grammatical errors, this story could've been a lot worse.
But one thing that personally bothers me is how you substitute an "a" with an "uh" whenever Joey speaks. I know he's got a Brooklyn accent in the dub but still...(just a hangup of mine). Also, the constant author notes popping in throughout every chapter is a bit distracting for me and kind of disrupts the flow of the story. Maybe you could keep them at the end? Just a suggestion.
As well, I find it hard to believe that Tea agrees to pretend to be Joey's girlfriend so easily, that Yugi is THAT clueless and that Kaiba would somehow become so juvenile and meddlesome as to taunt Tea about telling Yugi about her and Joey.
I think you're doing a pretty decent job though :) Overall, the story is an enjoyable read-- keep it up! |
 joeyxtea lover!!!!!!!! 2006-07-18 . chapter 14 PLEASE update! this story is amazing you can't stop updating all your joey/tea fanfics rock so please keep writing more and update this one! |
 kirstin 2006-07-16 . chapter 20 sorry that review was for the WHOLE story it looked like only ch 1 sorry bout that |
 kirstin 2006-07-15 . chapter 1 ok I know you haven't updated forever, but please update soon i love this story SO much! I've always wanted to see Tea and Joey together. You should really write more fanfictions about them. Your really good at this and I'm so into the story so PLEASE update! |
 chibidragon 2006-06-17 . chapter 20 I'm hooked. One of the best stories that I have ever read. You have definately made me a fan of this pairing, so please update soon! |
 cherryblossoms24 2006-05-06 . chapter 20Okie I've Five things to say...First, That was totally wicked! Your story is so awesome! Second, Kaiba is such an **!! He should rot in hell for making Joey and tea's life misreble! Third, Please don't be offened but I don't like YugiXTea or YamiXTea fanfics but I read your fics about them and I say it's not really bad. Fourth...Make more JoeyXtea fanics! XD and Lastly, Update soon! |
 cindy 2006-01-28 . chapter 20 I love this story so much, please update as soon as possible;the wait is killing me. |
 googlebear 2006-01-28 . chapter 20I think that this story is really great. It has romance and just the right amount of drama to not turn it into one of those over-drasmatic soap-operas. I also think that you kept them pertty much in character. I can't wait to read the update! |
 darkhearted lonewolf 2005-11-26 . chapter 20this has got 2 b the best joey/tea fic i have ever read! its so tense and sweet and...sweet...yeah... i cant wait for the next chapter, i hope you update it soon. ^_^ |
 mitzy cuevas 2005-11-23 . chapter 20 this is one of the most amazing stories i have ever read in my whole life. keep going. you are doing great. i hope to see the new part up soon. |
 A. Valentine 2005-10-22 . chapter 20Great chapter! Please update soon! |
 Dragon Kiana 2005-09-09 . chapter 20Wow, I LOVE IT! I am starting to fall in love w/ those two, please you must continue. They should stay together, and Yugi had his chance and so did Yami so tough >_<
By the way, whats the deal w/ cutie kaiba? he should mind his own business! I still love him though ^_^
Can't wait for the next chapter please let me know ASAP, your killing me hear |