 Peace Like a River 2007-05-28 . chapter 3 Wow, that has to be the funniest, sweetest thing I've read in forever! Lol, Now THERE'S the secret grand adventure of Captain Jack Sparrow lol Very good job writing it, it's pretty much flawless and very light and humorous, I loved it! :D |
 Lorraine 2006-08-09 . chapter 3 Since I grew up on a farm, this adventure of Cap'n Jack had me laughing out loud! Our goats used to escape on a regular basis and eat my mother's rose bushes down to bare branches, so having a goat rodeo was a frequent occurance at our farm. Imagining Jack chasing goats was great fun!
Jack being mugged by the hungry calves brought back memories of feeding our dozen bottle calves. Though I never got knocked down, just stepped on.
Thanks for all 3 parts of a very entertaining tale! |
 Poppy Cotton 2006-07-23 . chapter 3 Hahahaha! I totally loved this! this was so great!
ta,
Poppy |
 Celebsul 2005-10-09 . chapter 3I howled. I wept. This is so darn visual. What a comic talent! |
 from the silent planet(who was too lazy to sign on) 2004-06-03 . chapter 3 Hey! This is absolutely hilarious. I found it on someone's favorites and it is delightfully well-written and funny. |
 Rat 2004-04-15 . chapter 3Dang but that was good- are you writing some more? New FIC? |
 Rat 2004-04-15 . chapter 2HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA oh this was even better!
>He was going to kill Anamaria for this.
I think he just might do it too. |
 Rat 2004-04-15 . chapter 1OH MY GOSH this was way too funny!
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>"Mo," Dainty said.
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>"I agree," Jack said, nodding.
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brilliant humour! |
 Chelsegorn 2004-04-06 . chapter 3WOW! Amazing! Awsome! Nifty!
I love it! You should write more! I'm putting you on my Favorite authors list and adding this story to my favorites! Who ho! |
 Talamh 2004-03-27 . chapter 3Absolutely loved this story - just pure light hearted fun with our favourite pirate captain! What more could we ask for? ^_~ Loved all your characterisations and I look forward to reading more of your work! Are you planning on continuing 'Return of the Sparrow' soon?
~Talamh |
 Trinity Day 2004-03-16 . chapter 3Cute story. |
 SilentStep 2004-02-21 . chapter 3Kii, what a lovely little story! Jack on a farm, what an idea! Congratulations for pulling it off so nicely. You ought to write a sequel. |
 Almost Funny 2004-02-18 . chapter 3 Nice ending. That was a cute story, i liked it. It had some funny stuff in it. |
 Eledhwen 2004-02-18 . chapter 3Truly a delightful story, Kayden - so glad everything turned out for the best! And Jack birthing a cow was adorable! |
 bkfuenfifj 2004-02-18 . chapter 1I loved it! Yay for you! Very funny, original, characters are well done.
Do you have anymore fanfics? I want to read them, too!
*Kayla |