nice, very interesting, i will look forward to reading the next chapter. keep up the good work

that was super i really enjoyed it. p.s in chapter 1. it said soon instead of son by the way hope you write the next chapter very soon good bye

I found that story very good i liked what you did with the story so far keep it up

Awesome.Keep going!

DUN DUN DUN! What will happen next? O wait...theres still like, nine more chapter that i haven't read yet XD

AHAHAHA SHADOW THE ULTIMATE LIFEFORM DOESN'T KNOW WHETHER TO PUSH OR PULL A DOOR! AHAHAAHAHAHA IGNORE THIS REVIEW IT'S THE SUGAR AND CAFFINE TALKING NOT ME! I BELIVE I CAN FLY, I BELIVEV I CAN TOUCH THE SKYY!

Wait, Jules is Sonic's father right? Sorry, I don'tknow much about archie.

-_- shadow you are such a dolt.

lol i also wrote a story were sonic and shadow was related! Your story seems interesting so far...i'm gonna read chapter 2 now...

Awesome battle...I hope Maria and Shadow can handle this *breaks into tears* I can't thoe.

update, update!! i love this story...

AWESOME! I loved the fight scene! It ROCKED! ^^ Yay

COOL! I never get sick of reading this^^ nice work

O.o Cool! and it was funny^^

O.O Umm... interesting cliffhanger.